NeiRa OS: Total Surrender

The eyelock was beautiful. I thought Abba's Mamma Mia suited it well. Click on the link to listen to the song.

Here is something I wrote based on that. It's a little silly. But I so wanted to write this.

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NeiRa: Total Surrender

I've been cheated by you since I don't know when

So I made up my mind, it must come to an end

Look at me now, will I ever learn?

I don't know how but I suddenly lose control

There's a fire within my soul

Just one look and I can hear a bell ring

One more look and I forget everything, w-o-o-o-oh

Ragini tried hard to recall how he had left her all alone 20 years ago with two little children as she came down the stairs. She had to control herself for she knew that this was not forever. He was going to leave her in six months. But as soon as she saw him looking at her with the same devotion in his eyes, her heart melted. Her stern look slowly softened into a smile. And her eyes, denied leaving his. She knew she was a gone case. When will she ever learn?

Mamma mia, here I go again

My my, how can I resist you?

Mamma mia, does it show again?

My my, just how much I've missed you

Yes, I've been brokenhearted

Blue since the day we parted

Why, why did I ever let you go?

Mamma mia, now I really know,

My my, I could never let you go.

She felt pulled towards him as a moth to a fire. True, he was the fire that burned inside her making her warm. The more she looked at him, the more she realized how much she had missed this handsome man. She shouldn't have ever let him go. She so wished to keep him by her side even if it meant a thousand heartbreaks to her. How could she resist the urge to be with him forever? After all wasn't life giving her another chance? As she kept looking into his eyes, she slowly surrendered herself completely to her feelings for him.

I've been angry and sad about things that you do

I can't count all the times that I've told you we're through

And when you go, when you slam the door

I think you know that you won't be away too long

You know that I'm not that strong.

Just one look and I can hear a bell ring

One more look and I forget everything, w-o-o-o-oh

He looked at Nishi bringing her down the stairs. The world around him ceased to exist that moment. True, he was angry... scratch that... had been angry with her for so long. But looking at her coming down the stairs, dressed up beautifully as HIS bride. As soon as he thought that, he shook his head slightly. How could he ever think like that? It was just a contract. It was more of his wish that they get into this contract, he knew, but as she slowly lifted up her face to look at him, he wished he had never signed the contract. For by now he was totally lost in her beauty. How could he resist that slow smile?

Mamma mia, here I go again

My my, how can I resist you?

Mamma mia, does it show again?

My my, just how much I've missed you

Yes, I've been brokenhearted

Blue since the day we parted

Why, why did I ever let you go?

Mamma mia, even if I say

Bye bye, leave me now or never

mamma mia, it's a game we play

Bye bye doesn't mean forever

As she came walking towards him, his heart beat so loud that he was sure that she could hear him. He sincerely hoped that she didn't catch him looking at her. True, she had been the cause of his heartbreak, but to be honest, he had missed her. Especially the way she used to dress up for him whenever they went out. And seeing her so beautifully decked up after all these years was a sight to his sore eyes. How could he let her go after all this? He knew he won't be able to. Not again. As he kept looking deeper into her eyes, he slowly surrendered himself completely to his feelings for her.

Mamma mia, here I go again

My my, how can I resist you?

Mamma mia, does it show again?

My my, just how much I've missed you

Yes, I've been brokenhearted

Blue since the day we parted

Why, why did I ever let you go

Mamma mia, now I really know

My my, I could never let you go

As the garland exchange ceremony started, they looked at each other and softly promised to give themselves another chance. They had missed each other so much over the years and the time had finally come for them to forget the past. After all, they just couldn't let each other go again, can they?

Unknown to themselves, they had completely surrendered themselves to love. Will love be able to hold them together?

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Originally posted by: shabz50

Beautifully written their emotions put into words just beautiful

Originally posted by: hamna19khan

Tiana u nailed it once again.. Wow what an amazing use of words and their feelings are described so beautifully, I just wanna read it again...

Originally posted by: metoyou

Thanks Tiana for posting this here separately. Everyone can enjoy this now. I surely did 😊

You described their inner feelings so beautifully. That moment of today just did it for them; his gaze and her smile were pure, natural and so divine. It gave away how much these two actually love each other and how they still wish to be together

You nail it every time... and glad we have someone that understand their feelings so good.

Thank you once again 😊

Originally posted by: neiralove

You know, Tiana, I just had the longest day of my life. And when I get home, I log in and read this. And it immediately puts a great big smile on my face. 😊 Do you know why? Because, yes, love will be able to hold my Nachiket and Ragini together. It has and it always will.

Thank you Tiana for writing this beauty and for putting it out here for all of us to read. You're an angel ❤️

And a special shoutout to all the other fantastically talented writers on this forum--you guys all rock! ❤️ 🤗