OS: The Art of War - Page 2

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

This was awesome👏Loved every bit of it👍🏼

In front of the children they were civil, even sweet at times, and always supportive (they had both agreed that was important).

These lines showed NR behaving like true parents👍🏼 which we hardly get to see in the show... Hopefully we will see more like this in the future😳

It was only in private that she allowed herself to wallow in the wounds he had inflicted with sharp words carelessly thrown about

And these lines aptly describe Ragini😊... She will never ever let anyone know how hurt she is😊... Beautiful👏

She cursed the telltale blush that would inevitably creep up her neck

Now this is the fact... She may try and try but will never be able to hide her feelings for Nachiket😳

but her pride wouldn't allow her to give him the satisfaction of a response.

Ah... The great Ragini Patel pride.

But just before they ended up crashing gloriously together, he intertwined their fingers and kissed her hand, lips lingering.

I so loved this gentle gesture of Nachiket😳... How thoughtful of him❤️

The tender and familiar gesture sent a pang through her heart. She blinked back tears.
He had found the chink in her armor after all.

And in the end it was his sweet gesture that made her vulnerable and broke the wall around her heart😳... I loved this the best❤️... Lovely😳

Thank you for writing this😊... Do write more soon... Will be waiting

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Whew!

That was intense.. loved your description of their silent battle through Ragini's POV.. I am sure her bare back did things to him as well .. hehe..

Praying for such moments of them clashing after they start living with each other in the pseudo marriage as you rightly termed it.. but this was lovely.. fast paced and very sensual! <3

Thanks for writing this!! 😃😳😳

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Thank YOU for being so supportive every time I write, I can always count on your encouragement <3 You are a sweetheart. 😳

In reality Nachiket was torturing himself as much as he was torturing her - but when they are at odds he can't help but push her buttons, consequences be damned 😉 I look forward to their clashes as well but I hope they can repair the damage that has been done.

Originally posted by: poetic

Nidhi,

Thanks a lot.

This is smoking HAWT! But sensitive at the same time.

I would love to see this onscreen, but this is love.

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Aww!

You're a lovely, sensitive writer and I always look forward to whatever you write..

and you have an amazing ability to maintain brevity without compromising with emotions.. something I cannot do so I admire you double for that 😳