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Posted: 10 years ago
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Based on a true story, I decided to pen down a close one's plot and give it my own NeRa perspective...
I've been influenced a lot by "@iamcurious"

Below is the index

Page 1: Prologue

Hope you enjoy and don't forget to leave some feedback!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue

So, what are you waiting for!??', she said, breaking her heart into a million pieces...

Just go ahead and sign the damn thing , and her heart broke a little more...

Yes, she was asking her husband, Mr. Aman Malhotra for a divorce. It was him whom she hopelessly fell for a couple years ago or rather, she fell for his love for children and here she was, asking this man for a divorce to free herself from her life which was no less than hell.

Here's the signed document Miss Ragini Patel! Just for your information, you are most welcome! It's your fault that your eyes were on my bank account and not on me get it?!!' said Aman, his voice was dripping with sarcasm and had not a single bit of regret, even though it was because of him that he ruined his wife's life and his two adorable kids - Agham and Aarav.

Don't forget to take your two brats Miss Patel!' and yet his remarks continued to stab Ragini.

Thanks for the divorce! See you if I care!' and she went to her bedroom to bring her suitcases.

Tears rolled down her cheeks nonstop and she was traumatized by the way she's just seen her life go downhill... All of a sudden, she just slipped on the floor and had a massive injury... Her hand got bruised and her forehead began to bleed... Luckily, she managed to yell out her maid's name - Sunny Tai before she was knocked unconscious...

Ragini Tai! Yeh aapko kya hua?! Aman Saheb! Jaldi aao Ragini Tai ko bohot zor se chot aa gayi hai!' screamed Sunny Tai...

Sunny Tai! Abhi mera bohot important conference hai samjhe?! How dare you ask me to put first aid on this aurat! Waise bhi aapko pata nah ho toh bata deta hoon ki aaj maine Ragini ko talaq diya hai! We're officially divorced get it?!' he yelled to Sunny Tai...

Aap Ragini Tai se aise baat nai kar sakte! Jao main bhi dekhti hoon aajse aapke ghar kaam karne kaun aata hai! Pehle Ragini Tai ka yeh chot ka ilaaj kar lene do!' said Sunny Tai putting on a brave look.

Whatever!' said Aman... And he buttoned his coat to leave for a "so called conference" with a gorgeous girl in his luxury car - Rupali, leaving Ragini wounded on the floor with her two kids watching all this from under the dining table...

Oyy Agham! Papa aise kyu baat kar rahe hai?' said the 5 and a half year old to his twin...

Mujhe kya pata? Lekin papa itne bure nai ho sakte! Ab hum dono ki unse katti!'

The two were just too innocent to understand the intensity of the situation and they were unable to realise the bitter truth that their father - Mr Aman Malhotra was in fact never going to treat their mom and them decently. Both Agham and Aarav were used to being brutally beaten up by their father regularly and he used to vent out his frustration on his poor kids.

Meanwhile, Sunny Tai went to get a first aid kit and untidily treated Ragini's wound. In a few hours, Ragini regained consciousness and immediately left for her mom's place with her boys and Sunny Tai...

May fate never allow me to walk through these gates and step into this cursed home ever again... I hate you for what you've done Mr. Aman Malhotra...' said Ragini before stepping out of Malhotra Residentials...

Little did she know that fate had planned something totally different for her and maybe she hadn't lost her hope in love... One day her life would revolve around just one person - Nachiket Khanna...

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Now please leave some feedback!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
This is definitely an interesting premise..
excited to know what Nachiket's role is going to be.. is he going to be another divorcee who understands Ragini or a single guy who falls for Ragini and then falls in love with her kids as well :)

Lovely beginning, please continue this..
This part was tooo short <3

LOVE IT!

IamCurious will be so happy :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg..another painful epic for ragini..keeping cross all my fingers,she doesnt ends with Dr.Aman
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh yes..
Please don't make it too painful for our Ragini :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

Wow!

This is definitely an interesting premise..
excited to know what Nachiket's role is going to be.. is he going to be another divorcee who understands Ragini or a single guy who falls for Ragini and then falls in love with her kids as well :)

Lovely beginning, please continue this..
This part was tooo short <3

LOVE IT!

IamCurious will be so happy :)

so sweet of u fr dis msg sukhs! this iz just a trailer...
picture abhi baaki hai ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

so sweet of u fr dis msg sukhs! this iz just a trailer...
picture abhi baaki hai ;)


EAGERLY waiting! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Simran, this is great! I can't wait to see how Nachiket enters Ragini's life. Please update soon! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neiralove

Simran, this is great! I can't wait to see how Nachiket enters Ragini's life. Please update soon! 😊

😊hopefully i'll liv upto ur xpectations
Edited by AngelsFlyAlone - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

😊hopefully i'll luv upto ur xpectations


I'm sure you will! Can't wait! 😊

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