The Value of Truth FF Updated Chapter 4-Page 7 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Azka my dear, there is just one word for you -

TREMENDOUS! 👏👏👏

Tremendous, really! What effort you put into your writing.. every word is perfect, just what you want to convey - with such clarity and such impressive strength of writing and prose. Wow. Bowls me over each and every time! <3

This chapter was indeed beautiful..both of them finally coming to terms with their flaws as parents.. definitely the lowest point of their existence.. for before this, they let down only themselves.. but to realise they've let down their children, people they were supposed to care and protect their entire lives.. must be a shattering shattering moment and I could feel the gravity and pain of the moment so clearly through your writing..

And the way Nachiket was there for her.. by doing just the right things.. not leaving her side even once... really warmed my heart.. and then I let out a sweet sigh as your chapter ended, looking forward to even more beauty from you, the sensitive, brilliant writer 😳

Please keep writing, you're lovely!

Originally posted by: shabz50

Loved it how they are both thinking about there children and why they have these problems. Only they can understand esch others pain and loved how nachiket can only open up to his ragini.

Looking forward to next update

Originally posted by: neiralove

I have no words for the beauty of this piece. It's just simply AMAZING! 👏

I loved how Nachiket and Ragini both realized their mistakes and even shared a similar thought process in their understanding of their faults as parents. Ragini's pain and frustration combined with Nachiket's need to bury his own guilt to make her feel better was stupendous. You have a gift to capture raw emotions perfectly in words, creating a simply astounding story for us all to read. 😊

I can't thank you enough for this, Azka. I'm eagerly awaiting the next part! 😊

Originally posted by: JB-US

Thank you so much shikha (did I get that right?)

Personally I did not want to have only one person reach understanding but I wanted both characters to do so and realize their faults which is why I combined their guilt and frustrations and while it's new technique for me, I'm really happy that you liked it. 😊

And yes I'm working on the next update.

Originally posted by: JB-US

Sukhi, itni tareef. 😳

Thank you so much and I am very happy that you liked it.

Yes, personally i did feel that it was the lowest point of their existence when they realized that they not only have failed themselves and each other but the ones they gave life to as well. This was necessary for them to realize as parents their duties and the mistakes their made with their children. The problems that separate them include the ones with their own children hence they have to resolve those first before they attempt to solve their own. They have to be better parents first before they become better lovers and eventually husband and wife again.

By then they would have learned what is Important in all relationships, love, trust, honesty, understanding, etc. thanks to their children.

Yes I personally wanted to end the chapter on a sweet note which is why Aarav's meeting was delayed for the next chapter.😊