SS : Beautiful Now ... Part 6 updated Pg 31 - Page 22

Oh my god. This is so beautiful, intense and I am just speechless. You writing is just...wow. I just read this all from the beginning and I am surprised how this missed my gaze before. There is so much sorrow in the last chapter and the way they're slowly building a home is amazing. That and how you cleverly used the names nishanth and its short form to be Nish was amazing. This is what amazing parents and I love the way you portrayed them. Please update as soon as possible.

Awesome and emotional update 👏 . You clearly portrayed their situation... Now Nishanth is sick... He will get better right?? Please update soon... I am so eager to read more.. 😊

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Wow Rachna! I finally read chapter 5 😃

And I am in love with the way you write. The flow of this story..the words, the emotions..you do them so perfectly. I won't complain about the sad part because that's how this story should have been..intense. Intense love they had..the separation and then intense hatred. The way they are finding their way back. It's seems so natural. And the way you write about their emotions..Ragini's and Nachiket's 👏 👏 Thanks for writing. I'm waiting for the next :)

Originally posted by: metoyou

Look who is here Rachna... Back from the lost and found; it's ME! 😃 Like it or not but I am here to stay Cool

First things first, a big sorry for not giving my comments. I'm very late, yes I know. But beautiful stories like yours need my undivided attention so can't compromise. Toh der kis baat ki...let's start and you be prepared for a long comment 😉

Part 5

Of course everything about this story is good but this part too good. Nachiket admitting that he hasn't been a good father; the way he broke down made me sad too.

I really liked how you described his emotional and vulnerable side, we often see only Ragini's but it was a good change to see Nachiket like that.

Him wanting to stay shows that he wants to make it up to him, to her, to them...

And then my favorite part; 'No, you come here' he grasped her wrist and pulled her back to himself - all male and all authoritative.

There is something about this line which is so attractive, strong and powerful. That one pull shows somehow the love he has for her...

Let me read more...

Part 5B

Nachiket ka gussa dekhne layak hai! How I wish to see him like that It shows how much he still cares and loves Ragini.

Poor lady has suffered a lot but so glad he decided to let them stay in his house. Now I am getting curious how they will behave at home 😉

Oh and his concern for Nishant just melts my heart 😳

Thank you Rachna for this wonderful story. It's getting better and better. You know that we all love your work and like always, I want to read more!

Originally posted by: JB-US

Oh my god. This is so beautiful, intense and I am just speechless. You writing is just...wow. I just read this all from the beginning and I am surprised how this missed my gaze before. There is so much sorrow in the last chapter and the way they're slowly building a home is amazing. That and how you cleverly used the names nishanth and its short form to be Nish was amazing. This is what amazing parents and I love the way you portrayed them. Please update as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney

Awesome and emotional update 👏 . You clearly portrayed their situation... Now Nishanth is sick... He will get better right?? Please update soon... I am so eager to read more.. 😊

Rachana this is for you <3

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Rachana this is for you <3

And I FINALLY got my laptop back..

so I am going to be writing VERY soon!! Promise!

Awww...the last bit *deep sigh*

Things can be so simple if one takes an initiative to solve things. Glad Nachiket took the initiative. And what went wrong with Nishanth again?


I have one doubt though, why is Nachiket upset that she moved out? I mean she had no option he should rather feel guilty that she had to move out and live like this. Is it some ancestral property?

But lovely writing as usual my lady! 😃



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sukhi yaar such cute gifs you bring. That one is actually super cute. 😊