Neira Reunion FF : Updated on 20th June - Page 31 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: BlueMoon8

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks </font><font size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#ff0000">@ZainabSidd </font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">for the Update .. The Suhani part was so touchy.. For once I got emotional..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Loved the way you brought in the angle of the Children bonding with their parents over dinner and then the Photo Albums ..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Suhani part was the best ..</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">No one gives a damn for the errors/typos till you are able to convey the right emotions and expressions.. No one is perfect .. and it's usual for people to do mistakes.. Why do you get so low with it ?
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Please keep writing.. Last part of the story was wonderful .. So next part we get to see Nachiket and Ragini ?😳</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Do continue soon .. PM me, if possible, when you're done with your next Update..</font>



Omg
thanks for the lovely words.. 😳
Yes will update soon 😊
And will mail you for sure.
Thanks soo much 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: goldstar678

Zainadsidd,This is just too too good.the idea itself of the whole photo album bringing into the story is great.The bonding of kids with their parents for dinner and post dinner scenes is the real USP of this update.

Suhaani is the real sweetheart among all 5 kids even in the show.Keep writing and waiting for lots of Neira romance in your next update as mentioned by you.

It feels so nice actually to read so many FF and OS in our forum.We have so many talented writers and i think Neira brings the best out of everyone .






M glad u liked it... 😳
and yes suhani is the swtst amongst all.
next part will be fullon NeiRa kinda... all sort of rides.
Don't miss it...
m happy that you people liked my FF...
Thanks for the support guys.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Lovely emotional update
update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sampa79

Lovely emotional update

update soon next part



Thanks sampa..
yes will update sooon
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
such a beautiful update Zainab...
D scenario and concept... WOW... such a hidden talent u r dear 👍🏼

Loved Suhani's part d most.. for once I was carried away and had tears for her feelings and den U just brought out the past n couldn't help but smile till d end

Waiting for next update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak

such a beautiful update Zainab...

D scenario and concept... WOW... such a hidden talent u r dear 👍🏼

Loved Suhani's part d most.. for once I was carried away and had tears for her feelings and den U just brought out the past n couldn't help but smile till d end

Waiting for next update 😊



Awwieee Jia Thankyou.
It means alott..
Will update the next part soon. 😳
Thanks for the support... 😆 😃

Will try and update the next part very sooon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Zainab

wonderful bonding between kids and parents

perfect romance

Thanks for that suhani and Ragini's photo

what else, you are fab dreamer... be blessed and keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

Zainab

wonderful bonding between kids and parents

perfect romance

Thanks for that suhani and Ragini's photo

what else, you are fab dreamer... be blessed and keep writing




Awwwieee Vidya... 😳
Tysm yaa... M glad you liked it..
Thanks for the compliment Dear 😊
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Will update the next part soon. hope you like that tooo.
Fingers crossed

👏
Keep supporting me ... 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Next part is ready for update.
I don't know how to mail the link.
Can anyone help ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
NEW UPDATE :


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Part 4 (a): You mean the world to Me.

Part 4 (b) on page 9... Vidya do read



Ragini steps out of her room in tears thinkng about her daughter Suhani.
Ragini knew what her little girl when through all these years.
She was sad, she felt she did injustice to everyone specially Nachiket.
She starting thinking about the old times. Her Nachiket and those memories.
A mix feeling thought emerged into her.
She loved him into bits and pieces. She missed his touch, care, their fights, long drives, celebrations, laughter everything.
A sudden sadness ran through her. She knew she loved him and will always love him no matter what. She went into kitchen to get water and was engrossed into deep thoughts.
Nachiket also stepped out of his room. He came out and saw Ragini. She was buried in her own thoughts.
He thought to scare her like he used to do earlier. He went slowly to the kitchen and caught hold of her from behind. Ragini was scared totally and screamed. Nachiket rushed his hands on her mouth to calm her down thats when she realised it was him. She was breathing heavly as she was soo scared. She looked at him and asked him with her expressions to leave her.
He was soo into her that he forgot to do that. He quickly took back his hands and said.
Nachiket - Ragini chillao mat ... bacche uth jayenge.
Ragini - Tumne he daraya tha mujhe nachiket. Aur tum yaha itni raat ko ? Sona nai hai ?
Nachiket - woh neend nai aa rahi thi. Socha bahar ghum lu thoda. Tumhe dekha toh socho chalo thodi masti hojaye par tum itna tez chillaye ki mai khud dar gaya.
Ragini - Laughs at him. Mujhe darane aayye the aur khud bhi dar gaye.
Nachiket was lost in her eyes those lovely eyes shining even in the darkness. Her smile is where his little world was settled. Gazing at her as she was laughing was such cute. He was soo lost into her. He looked at her and with his fingers he touched her face. He pulled her cheecks that is what he loved to do. Ragini did not like anyone touching and pulling her cheecks expect Nachiket.. for Nachiket everything and anything was allowed.
Ragini blushed as his touch was soo different. It would make her go mad.
Ragini - Nachiket ????
Nachiket was all lost and suddenly hearing his name he bounced back to reality.
Nachiket - Chillao mat bacche jaag jayenge.
Ragini - Nachiket jaake so jao kaafi raat hogayi hai.. mai bhi jaa rahi hu.
Nachiket was not at all ready to miss this chance... He said he wanted to sit here. He asked her to join him.
Ragini felt akward as she knew their kids where sleeping in their rooms. What if anyone would wake up. What if they saw them together.
Ragini - Nachiket bacche uth gaye toh kya sochenge.
Nachiket - Kya kya sochenge. Yehi sochenge ki unke mummy papa kitne romantic hai. Tum toh aise keh rahi ho jaise woh hamare nai kisi aur k bacche hai.
Ragini gave him that "shut up nachiket" wala look.
He said come and sit na baba. Aaj chandni raat bhi hai and mujhe pata hai tumhe bhi neend nai aa rahi. Aajo baith k baatein karte hai.
Ragini wanted to sit besides him as she loved it. They used to talk to each other for hours at night time. That was the only time when nachiket was free and ragini too. They always gave each other the attention that proper wala attention.
Ragini - Haan thike.
Nachiket was very happy as after 15 yrs he had Ragini Nachiket Khanna sitting besides him. He knew they divorced 15 yrs ago and she was Ragini Patel now, but that was all a stupid MU between them that happend. That paper did not matter to him. He used to love her and he still does. Whatever it was she alwys was Nachiket's Ragini. He gave no importance to those papers. Cause Nachiket's heart belonged only to Ragini.
Ragini sat besides him. At start it was little akward about from where to start but he knew he has to take the first step. He wanted to make the atmosphere light so he started asking stupid questions.
Nachiket - Ragini tumhe kabhi mere jaisa handsome ladka dikha 15yrs mai ?
Ragini knew what he was trying to do. She wanted to enjoy every second with him besides him. She said if he can make me feel comfortable y cant I.
Ragini - Ladke aur tum ? Bhulo mat Nachiket ki tum 5 baccho k baap ho. 5 bade baccho k baap. With a smile and wink.
Nachiket - tum jalti hona ki mai itna handsome hu. Haina ? I know tumse dekha nai jataa. Tumhe jalan hoti hogi na
??
Ragini - Kuch bhi nachiket.
Nachiket - I know hoti hai jalan tumhe... hoti he hogi.
Ragini - mujhe kyu hogi. Mujhe pata hai *pointing towards nachiket* yeh handsome sirf mera hai. Only mine. Jalan dusro ko honi chahiye.
Those words of ragini just brightened Nachiket's world. She was soo sure about her feelings and his tooo. He smiled on the dialouge which just Ragini said.
My god those words were soo true. He laughed at it and she laughed too. It took only few seconds for them to get comfortable with each other.
He said lets play Truth and Dare ?
She said no. She knew it was dangerous to play that game with him. He said darrr gayi abhi se. These words were enough to provoke her.

Edited by ZainabSidd - 10 years ago

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