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Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely!!!! this is soo wonderful!!

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Amina Choudhury

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Posted: 10 years ago

Been stalking the forum for some NeiRa oS's and came across this one...so glad I did! What brilliant description of the dinner date...the little things they are both feeling and doing automatically it's so cute. Loving the memories.

Can't wait for the next part ;)

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Nivriti

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully worded. I love the little nuances of flashback you are weaving with the present.

Just try to make the next one longer, they kind of finish too soon.

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks a lot for all your appreciation :)

I'll try and write more.. And write longer parts.. Thanks!

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

Next part next part Jaldi likho

I read it all at one go

Am goin to read again

Update yaar soon

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia
Next part next part Jaldi likho

I read it all at one go
Am goin to read again

Update yaar soon

Aiming to write tonight :)

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Aiming to write tonight :)

Can't wait!

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

I get a feeling you've got a ton of ideas in your head.. Please write yourself! :)

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ronitfan
I get a feeling you've got a ton of ideas in your head.. Please write yourself! :)

I think I am good at ideas not so much at story writing

But shall try my hand 😊

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia

I think I am good at ideas not so much at story writing

But shall try my hand 😊

Thanks so much for trying.. It was lovely 😊

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