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ntmrjn

@ntmrjn

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#461

I am enlightened with this fact that i got to be part of this story now...well i just hope many writers would come up like this..This story as i have heard is way too beautiful and am enjoying it..thanks for writing it.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#462

You never know when your dreams become nightmares.. Awesome

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#463

Ah..shyam is a saviour...

Now i feel arnav has the right to pursue his dreams but maybe as khushi pointed he shud have talked to his family...

He is still stuck in the past wherr he was a helpless kid..

But he just needed to vent out his frustration and khushi ga e him the perfect opportunity.

Now she doesn't have to stay back...

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#464

oh no there you ruin all of it...nooo...grrr Arnavvv

for some reason i had forgotten this part...i guess i know y 😛

I like shyam..he is a nice person..and loves anjali...very few stories where Shyam is likeable 😃

fantastic chapter...

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chitra8710

@chitra8710

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#465

Beautiful update. Arnav has so much anger problem he doesn't see whom he hurts in the process.

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#466

Arnav and Anjali both are still living in the past but both have different ways of handling the present , if Anjali is welcoming all the love given to her by the family , Arnav is scared to welcome it .

The way Arnav behaved with Khushi was rough he did it in anger as Khushi as pointed out his flaws and I am pretty sure that he will regret it later

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Gc01

@Gc01

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#467

Came across this story today. Enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to more of your work
Annu

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#468

Beautiful update! First love is so innocent... you have depicted it so well 🤗

Considering that I have read it the first time, it's really hard to comment since I am worried about giving away what's coming up... 😆 although I can see that you have written this chapter very differently from the first time. 👏

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Jay Shree

@Reshmajaya

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#469

There goes my romantic Arnav and Khushi sweet love in flames😭 the sweet gestures that Arnav been doing were too good to be true.. but i must say i love Asr anger i was missing it!!im sure he's gonna repent on what he did when he is calm but i guess the damage already done..Sandhya once again u nailed it with this chapter.awesome update❤️ i love it.