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Savera84

@Savera84

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 6 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Savera i loved your thread on Anjali and the two OS . Why dont u write a FF
i love reading u r comments.
you write with a deep understanding of emotions
why not write one with a manipulative anjali where snake is actually another victim
grey payal who will go to any extent to protect her sibling
maybe finding kushi real family

Hi Dear, Thank you for the lovely words on my work and comments. My work is no where near any of the beautiful tales I am currently reading. I love to decode and speculate even though I am off the mark most of the times. 😊

To be honest, I drafted few small stories, but I always stuck at a point, where I think this scene is not reasonable or it is too illogical and then I move on to the next draft.

Meanwhile I won't stop writing drabbles or small OSs.

Cheers...

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#852

Arnav is behind aniket's job in australia too.. it was awesome chapter.. he have not only made yamini agree but made that aniket to leave so that his brother can get married to payal and be happy always.. Khushi is so angry with Arnav and payal.. Arnav is amazing brother.. loved the update.. Thanks 😊

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#853

lovely update... did arnav have a hand in sending Aniket to Australia???

i suspect he did something about this issue too 😊

oh khushi is whooping mad at him 😃

eagerly waiting for the next!

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 6 years ago

#854

I have a strong feeling that Arnav was behind withdrawal of Aniketh's proposal and his Australian job offer.
Now, how is Arnav going to deal with Khushi. Old Arnav would just Khushi let be herself and not give any explanation to his actions. But this Arnav should respect their friendship, so, what will he say.

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#855

lovely update..

i really liked payal's parents attitude of keeping their word... but did they know that payal also loved akash... i dont think they beleive that..

i hope this akash's mother's attitude improve fast...isn't it arnav behind aniket new job in australia.. becoz the way arnav is playing with his mobile is screaming it...

relationship between both khushi 's and payal's family .. is so beautiful,,, warm.. n lovely...

no wonder .. khushi is pissed of... he should have told her.. atleast warned her... but.. what i am earger to ...is to know those FACTS...

waiting... 😊

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#856

so.. payash ... going to happen

Edited by lilakumariacnw - 6 years ago

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Savera84

@Savera84

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+ 36

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 6 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: lilakumariacnw

so.. payash ... going to happen

They are looking lovely. Pity, they don't have any such scenes in the show. This must be on the sets, right?

Cheers...

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lilakumariacnw

@lilakumariacnw

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: Savera84

They are looking lovely. Pity, they don't have any such scenes in the show. This must be on the sets, right?
Cheers...

yes... so true...

i used to wish them (makers , writers) taking some inspirations from stories in IF...

makers didn't develop the other characters well...

i still feel IF writers are much better...