The Girl & The Ghost | ArShi | Completed

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

That was wonderful start dear...

I really loved the storyline and the first part... i am curious to see how Arnav and Kushi going to get closure and how their life going to be...

All the best👍🏼

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Wow. This is damn interesting!! Very well written. Will this be a romance/drama or a thriller? Arnav as a ghost had me wondering about arshi's union and future. Please do update this. This will be one story I'll be eagerly looking forward to.

Edited by poojasidd123 - 7 years ago

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: unnik7
The story is interesting.. arnav as a ghost.and ready to scare khushi. But i dont think khushi kumari gupta is that much timid to runaway from arnav.

Originally posted by: unnik7
Please continue the story. It is very much interesting. . And you have that potential to create a good work.

Thanks for reading and commenting! Yeah, Arnav has given himself a week to scare her but is she, like you say, that timid to run away? 😃

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
wow it's interesting

Thanks for reading and commenting! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
wow it's interesting

Thank you! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sanoniti
interesting start. Nice concept. continue soon

Thank you for the review and reading! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Uzii
Wow such a different story so plz continue

Thank you so much. Will definitely do so. :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...
awesome story dear

Originally posted by: Riddhimaa...
loved it very much

Thank you so much! Really glad to read your views :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: coderlady
Hopefully Arnav will turn out to be a friendly ghost.

Hopefully 😉

Thanks for reading! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sadhnasoumya
Omg arnav is a ghost
Usually I don't like horror stories but this seems friendly
Khushi is in so much trouble
Payal was saying the truth

Glad to know you're giving the story a read. Thanks a lot! :)