Arshi TS: The Empty Cradle; Last Shot- Pg 24

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jj23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

May b khushi's mother will ask her to fake pregnancy...n abt arnav m not sure...he seems to b vry insensitive...y he smiled?

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Alicia2012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Wow great short story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and i feel so sorry for khushi and i hope arnav is going to be ok with khushi and congratulations on your story.

Happy holidays to you and your family and friends. And welcome back.

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Sarah Sherwani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Hi it is nice story very practice but why Khushi is losing hope from opinion from one doctor?

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Nimie207

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Kudos for such an attempt Shalu...such real life stories are certainly an eye-opener from all these fairytale 'not so happening' fictions...Garima is the typical Indian mother and Arnav...aaha..no idea abt him..typical male I guess... whatever be Arnav's reply or Garima's solution...i just want Khushi to stand up for herself and not be a scapegoat..no women deserves to be just a bedmate for her husband!!!

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AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

what type of a mother is khushi"s... how can a mother say that you should not make a fuss because its a husbands right.. how can arnav treat her just like a bedmate...he is so mush cold to her.. i dnt think its matter to him...

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ifeshaye

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Nice . I can't wait what will happen next . Thanks

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Titaliya1234

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

awesome shot! why do I feel Arnav is gonna do something bug?!?

No hopes from Garima though 🥱 Does she even care for her daughter?

And feeling bad for khushi! She went thru a lot!

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Niranjana R

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Arnav is so curel man... At her sadness he is smiling

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mahrusweety

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

that interesting and awesome start.
continye soon

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sonali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

What a come back di...awesome and hatke concept. Arnav and khushi in a arranged marriage and the character of arnav is so unemotional..feeling bad for khushi..but have no idea why arnav is like this..what is going on his head..why he is so unaffected... i think garima is trying to suggest about surrogacy.. and such things happens in every ones life like if someone has nice husband then the rest of the family is not understanding and vice varsa..glad you write something like this...

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