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Originally posted by: clairvoyance
Very emotional...I want all harsh dialogues of arnav from the start to this one to replay later. Very well written.
Just a point to make.The basic aim of you giving us update is to tell a story seamlessly. But sometimes the write up is full of confusions. It affects the flow of story. Nowhere in the previous chapters a direct reference to khushis pregnancy is made. But you have replied to readers and talked about pregnancy . I want the story to do the explanation. Your replies can be add on for us to know better. But the events happening in the story should come directly from your update clearly not in a confusion manner which also you later clarify in your replies. That doesn't make sense. The past present future is also another confusing narrative. Just tell us what is happening , no puzzles. Because if it's puzzles than why go on explaining in replies about the plot. Your story plot is more in replies and less explanation in update. This update was however clear for readers to understand what is happening. But some previous updates were so confusing, I had to go through replies to understand the plot.
Thanks dear , a very good point indeed . I agree I give out too much of plot line sometime and it may not be good .
Well this story would say bye to India forum soon and move to blog so definitely there won't be anymore one to one chats then from my side . Hehe!
But till then I will try to take care of this point .
Thanks 🤗
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