ArHi FF: No One Can Love You More By Lyraa99- CH 11 UPD PG-91 27-02-17

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Addie07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Surprise Surprise

The next update will be on the 28th

The readers who asked for my blog link

https://chequeredpathways.wordpress.com/

Readers who are on twitter please follow me here

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I have a reason behind asking you to follow me and you will know it in the next update

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kirti123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Thanks for the pm

Khushi is suffering for no fault of hers

Lavanyas betrayal is out

But not the whole truth that Shyam was the. Culprit

Khushi's job seems to be dangerous

Waiting to read Nxt

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Engaging update. Interesting to see how Arnav will react when he realizes that Khushi has been completely innocent al this while!

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Addie07

No but if you message me your email id, I will send you a pdf😊

I would love that too, girl. Will PM you.

Best,

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madhu1210

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Nice start..

Khusji is out of jail...

Is she working now for what??? Gun shot wound in her leg??

Just now Akash said she is in RM...

Eagerly looking forward

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Lyraa,

The sadness continues with this one...sigh! Reckon we cannot expect much else given the scenario. I am a little unclear at this point why Khushi has a gun shot wound and those sickening nightmares...was it not clearly a car accidents that landed her in jail to begin with? Also, Arnav's thoughts seem ambivalent at this point. Does he love her at all or not really? Aakash seems the only one Khushi has confessed her experiences to...where has she been in the one year out of jail? Waiting! 🤗

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Addie07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Anu567

Lyraa,

The sadness continues with this one...sigh! Reckon we cannot expect much else given the scenario. I am a little unclear at this point why Khushi has a gun shot wound and those sickening nightmares...was it not clearly a car accidents that landed her in jail to begin with? Also, Arnav's thoughts seem ambivalent at this point. Does he love her at all or not really? Aakash seems the only one Khushi has confessed her experiences to...where has she been in the one year out of jail? Waiting! 🤗

Anu,

You seemed to have picked up most of the scattered clues that I left in this update.. Well, this FF is gonna be one hell of an angst fest.. Though in RIB and BTS, Khushi was a weak character. I mean she suffered too but the experience weakened her. And that increased her dependence on people..

In this one, I thought I'd work something on the premise of 'What doesnt kill you makes you stronger"

Here I'm hoping to show her vulnerable and fragile and yet with a backbone of steel and a fierce determination to go with it..

Thankyou for your words

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Wow that was an amazing update.

Superb analysis of their pain and dilemma.

Continue soon.

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Param

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Awesome start.. so Khushi have loved that someone who have sent her to jail and that someone is also thinking about her and still have not come to realisation what his feelings were for her.. loved the start..

thanks for pm 😊