[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: The Sinner (Moved to Blog)

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#311

Update coming in 15 minutes 😃

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: MDTharun
You are good in writing mystery stories which captures readers attention 👏

Tysm!😊

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#313

Comment written by Kiddo_Star:

First of all Saraa Dida, thank you so so sooo much for res-ing the post on my behalf. Thank you yaara. 😛

Oh God! What an update yaar!

Rollercoaster ride laga mujhe toh...

and now after reading Saraa Didu's comment and her theory coming true I can't just comment any longer *sniff*

Khushi is working for Shyam! Argh! Why man? Why Shyam? Koi aur nahi mila tha kya usse?

And that smile.. Argh! Why did she pass that smile to that hoodie person? I hate him. I hate Khushi too maybe.

Maybe she's playing along with Arnav as said by Saraa Didu but along with it she's even double crossing Shyam, what's say. It's true, right?

*sigh* My Brian stops working when it comes to Simi Didu's story. I can't imagine anything. Bcoz at the end it's always something unexpected

So Simi Didu pls just update soon and I am waiting her to comment

Love,

Yours,

Munchkin 🤗

Edited by ..KittyKat.. - 9 years ago

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#314

I was right she was working for/with Shyamu. Seducing Arnav was her agenda and Shyamu got a girl so beautiful that even Arnav couldn't resist. Because Everybody Wants to Rule the World.

Shyamu- the mysterious man🤣

Khushi is such a seductress, even though she is not interested in doing the job she is still doing it. Her reluctance and her not willing to buy anything for herself except a notebook in which she can keep a record of her journey. But she is somehow getting attracted to Arnav in this play and she is going off track, no wonder she wanted to go out to make Shyamu aware of the progress made by getting out of the house.

Ha!

Anyways, it was a very beautiful update, it connected to the previous updates so well and the poems now are so easy to understand once the reader understands your style of writing.

Poems are just fabulous. I love them. That add a little tinge to the already perfect platter.

I absolutely love it, love it, love it, love it.

Love,

Saraa :*

Edited by ..KittyKat.. - 9 years ago