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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Inquin

I agree... I hound this site too pretty often. And indeed you have given us the taste of gazelle. We won't settle down for anything less...😉

Plz update soon...Or you will miss my 🤗




I am trying to write the next part at work even today.😉 Last weekend was a washout as I am redecorating my house and had too many things happening. Keeping my fingers crossed for this week. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
when are you updating yaar...

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Manishi1

Hi dear, Started reading this story from yesterday and got hooked to it. Nicely written. I think Khushi fell in Love with wrong person. She fell in Love at very tender age which could have been easily forgotten if all good in her family. Arnav is totally Selfish here.I hope khushi to become more strong here and pays no attention to Arnav until he learns the lesson.
Thanks and keep updating.
-Manisha

Hi Manisha,
Sorry for the late reply, and just getting caught up with comments. I am so glad that you have decided to read this story. Right and wrong, I don't know, but definitely she might have moved on had her circumstances be different maybe. Aarnav is a good guy but he had his issues with Khushi and his trust in her...It would take lot of effort on both their parts to come to the point where they would be totally committed to each other.
TC and keep reading.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
Heartbreaking chapter...poor kushi...its really a hard knock on her head n heart...there's no trust in their 'relationship'...one after another misunderstandings...
One part cant really blame arnav as he just listen w/o checkg w kushi first...but 9 parts i don agree with his way of dealing it...yes he felt betrayed...but what abt kushi?...her hurt only got doubled coz she gave her all to him...hope his brain starts working soon...sad to see both miserable...

Sorry dear for commenting late...always trying to get watever spare time i've got to check out the forum...must say I LOVE your story...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: brishti84

Ch16: Damn I don't know what to say. I knew this confrontation and subsequent revelation was going to be heartbreaking for Khushi but this was just depressing. Ahhh I know...and I am trying to not make this upcoming part real depressing or boring and that's my biggest challenge to write. Even more so because it happened in layers, slowly and painfully as realization dawns on her that yes he is actually saying and meaning everything coming out of his mouth! I knowww, I felt that blow by blow😭

This is going to be the shortest review I've done for any of your stories 😆 I don't want to dwell on Khushi's heartbreak cause our girl deserves so much better. Not do I want to see Arnav's point of view because he deserves nothing here. Hehe...that's ok ...one day he would make up for this.

I'm excited for the leap. Is it only a month per the teaser? I was hoping for a longer one because a month is definitely not enough time to get over what Khushi just went through. You are right, it is one month only...and I didn't want their meeting to be delayed by too long...He had to feel that burn and desperation to contact her again...Otherwise...too much time would have passed...down the line. I also wished she'd move away though I totally understand her wish to care for her family. I am curious as to how he will find out the truth and if they'll meet before or after that because that can change how the story moves forward. That;s the whole thing...he wants her still...and I am not talking in physical term...I mean he wants her to be with him...despite of all his belief and his desperation would grow...once she would start rejecting him... If they meet before he's just going to dig a deeper grave for himself which I am not sure I want him to come out of. When the time comes for his repentance the nature of their relationship would have changed...and times would be different...If they meet after him knowing the truth he'll be in his best repenting mood 😳 I can't help but be sarcastic and uncaring to everything Arnav right now. What an ass!

No matter what he would be charming as usual😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Writing the next part very sincerely. It is going to be a very long part🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: matosarah

Writing the next part very sincerely. It is going to be a very long part🤔


I think its time to create a new thread 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla


I think its time to create a new thread 😛


Yah I have been brainstorming about that too.😉...It's been a crazy weekend.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nzmonica

Hi Ritu

Fantastic story...Poor khushi has had a hard time, but like Ira prayed, here prince is here.
So enchanting that she fell in love at 16 and her feelings remained unchanged despite everything she went through.
Arnav is in denial of his love.

I really enjoyed how the characters are REAL, they are human. And there are no over the top vilians.

Yes we have negative people, mani who is selfish and self centered, kelly who is only concerned about her wants and lastly, shay am - he's vile and abhorrent but not nefarious.

Then there is Tanu, who is innocent and wants everyone to be in love like she is. ... but she lacks perspective and is always pairing arnav with Lavanya and khushi with shaamil. Paying no attention to their words or body language.

All in all, I have enjoyed reading this ff of yours, Ritu.

I will PM you again with my request.Thanks Monica, glad to have you here with us reading this one. So much more is coming in this fiction and I do hope I maintain the same momentum and get regular with this story.
Do keep reading and I would like to hear more from you.🤗

Thanks Monica

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Posted: 8 years ago
Please update soon! eagerly awaiting!

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