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Posted: 9 years ago
Gotta unreserve my post first! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Gotta unreserve my post first! 😉


Hehe!
🤗
Welcome back!
Do it soon.
Last part is ready 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Simmo!😳

What a great story line you have here, portraying Arnav as Mark Anthony in every sense of the word and showcasing Sapna as Brutus for she wanted the good for her and eventually all by eliminating Guptaji, our Julius Caesar. My theory that's all.


But Arnav as Mark Anthony and Khushi as Julius Ceasar showcased the perfect portrayal of friendship, trust and faith and also where the most trusted friend stabs you in the back. In this case, Sapna did that.

The moment Arnav said that he was quitting the West Gala was a shocker but yes, it was the one of the best ways, if not the only way out of the mess created.

It was one mature decision, where such trivial things do not matter and you got to look at the bigger picture. These silly things for which you fight for won't even matter 10 years from now.

But, I also believe that if competition is healthy then after the misunderstanding has been washed off, it would only benefit the people in the future. Because, it is the small things that matter. It is these small things you do that make you a better person and put out your personality. These small steps are necessary. This doesn't mean I'm just talking about the West Gala, don't take me wrong here, its these simple opportunities you get to showcase your talent that add to the bigger picture.


And where, Arnav is concerned and other people backing out,they should conduct the competition again and ask the head not to divide the streams but combine them and then send them for the competition.

Otherwise, there's no use of West Gala, according to me.


And my sweetheart, showcasing their past and having them realize their feelings for each other was a splendid treat to read. I loved how you made them gradually fall in love. I mean Arnav eyeing Gupta, his enemy that too in red sari, wow! And the karva chauth night it was just out of the world scenario, I loved it so much that I read it again and again and that comment from Sardarji had me in splits😆

This not only showcases that you can write thriller but also romantic comedy, you rock at it to.

You have done a wonderful job with this story and I would love to see surprises in the last update too. 😛



Love,
Saraa😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for the next part
Edited by ranogill - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiitng waiitng waiting 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Must say amazing back to back chapters. So arnav's speech had such an effect that students from both the teams are asking the other team to represent the college. And in the end they want to back out all together.
But I have a feeling that in this gala both the streams will participate together as one team.
The flashback was so cute. Loved how slowly they fell in love. Waiting for their happy everafter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting for you since eternity...
Baby please don't kill me with curiosity...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Waiting for you since eternity...

Baby please don't kill me with curiosity...


Updated 😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sydy

Must say amazing back to back chapters. So arnav's speech had such an effect that students from both the teams are asking the other team to represent the college. And in the end they want to back out all together.

But I have a feeling that in this gala both the streams will participate together as one team.
The flashback was so cute. Loved how slowly they fell in love. Waiting for their happy everafter.


Thank you so much! 😊
The last part has been updated.
Let me know how you like it.

Best,
Simi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Hey Simmo!😳


What a great story line you have here, portraying Arnav as Mark Anthony in every sense of the word and showcasing Sapna as Brutus for she wanted the good for her and eventually all by eliminating Guptaji, our Julius Caesar. My theory that's all.


But Arnav as Mark Anthony and Khushi as Julius Ceasar showcased the perfect portrayal of friendship, trust and faith and also where the most trusted friend stabs you in the back. In this case, Sapna did that.

The moment Arnav said that he was quitting the West Gala was a shocker but yes, it was the one of the best ways, if not the only way out of the mess created.

It was one mature decision, where such trivial things do not matter and you got to look at the bigger picture. These silly things for which you fight for won't even matter 10 years from now.

But, I also believe that if competition is healthy then after the misunderstanding has been washed off, it would only benefit the people in the future. Because, it is the small things that matter. It is these small things you do that make you a better person and put out your personality. These small steps are necessary. This doesn't mean I'm just talking about the West Gala, don't take me wrong here, its these simple opportunities you get to showcase your talent that add to the bigger picture.


And where, Arnav is concerned and other people backing out,they should conduct the competition again and ask the head not to divide the streams but combine them and then send them for the competition.

Otherwise, there's no use of West Gala, according to me.


And my sweetheart, showcasing their past and having them realize their feelings for each other was a splendid treat to read. I loved how you made them gradually fall in love. I mean Arnav eyeing Gupta, his enemy that too in red sari, wow! And the karva chauth night it was just out of the world scenario, I loved it so much that I read it again and again and that comment from Sardarji had me in splits😆

This not only showcases that you can write thriller but also romantic comedy, you rock at it to.

You have done a wonderful job with this story and I would love to see surprises in the last update too. 😛



Love,
Saraa😃

I am at a loss of words today hon.

All I wanna say genuinely to you is Thank You.
Thank you for loving this story so much and always being such an encouraging soul. Thanks for understanding my vision so aptly with this story and my characters and genuinely registering your opinion with each of the updates.

I love you. BAS. ❤️
Edited by Simi1711 - 9 years ago

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