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Downhill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#401

simply brilliant

loved it

truly awesome story

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crazyji

@crazyji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#402

Wow super cool update...

What arnav decided was correct...

And tbeir lobe story was cool...

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#403

Hey Simmo!😳

What a great story line you have here, portraying Arnav as Mark Anthony in every sense of the word and showcasing Sapna as Brutus for she wanted the good for her and eventually all by eliminating Guptaji, our Julius Caesar. My theory that's all.

But Arnav as Mark Anthony and Khushi as Julius Ceasar showcased the perfect portrayal of friendship, trust and faith and also where the most trusted friend stabs you in the back. In this case, Sapna did that.

The moment Arnav said that he was quitting the West Gala was a shocker but yes, it was the one of the best ways, if not the only way out of the mess created.

It was one mature decision, where such trivial things do not matter and you got to look at the bigger picture. These silly things for which you fight for won't even matter 10 years from now.

But, I also believe that if competition is healthy then after the misunderstanding has been washed off, it would only benefit the people in the future. Because, it is the small things that matter. It is these small things you do that make you a better person and put out your personality. These small steps are necessary. This doesn't mean I'm just talking about the West Gala, don't take me wrong here, its these simple opportunities you get to showcase your talent that add to the bigger picture.

And where, Arnav is concerned and other people backing out,they should conduct the competition again and ask the head not to divide the streams but combine them and then send them for the competition.

Otherwise, there's no use of West Gala, according to me.

And my sweetheart, showcasing their past and having them realize their feelings for each other was a splendid treat to read. I loved how you made them gradually fall in love. I mean Arnav eyeing Gupta, his enemy that too in red sari, wow! And the karva chauth night it was just out of the world scenario, I loved it so much that I read it again and again and that comment from Sardarji had me in splits😆

This not only showcases that you can write thriller but also romantic comedy, you rock at it to.

You have done a wonderful job with this story and I would love to see surprises in the last update too. 😛

Love,

Saraa😃

Edited by ..KittyKat.. - 9 years ago

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR
Omg!!!
I m totally speechless... *.*
How do u manage to do it simi???
Portray each and every emotion of the character so beautifully... 👏
1 can never find lose ends in ur chapters... Everything is connected so well...
Thanks a loadsss for the arshi flashback...its the best gift for any reader who has read this story from start...I will read these two chapters again in the night and comment back...I enjoyed it a lot...

Thanks a bunch dear 🤗

Glad u loved this story this much :) :)

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

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Posted: 9 years ago

#405

Awww...such a sweeet story...

your arshi are plain adorable...

loved the way u have written about their meetings...

eagerly waiting for the last part...

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: momoahmd
Awww...such a sweeet story...
your arshi are plain adorable...
loved the way u have written about their meetings...
eagerly waiting for the last part...

Tysm😳😳

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#407

such a beautiful story ..and please when you finish story we want epilogue in which we want a peek into their future

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 9 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: ranogill
such a beautiful story ..and please when you finish story we want epilogue in which we want a peek into their future

Haha.. Thanks for so much love to this piece hon! 🤗

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#409

Really good story .. different and gripping ... i like yur way of writing :)

Enjoyed reading it... waiting fr next part

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sillyfish9

@sillyfish9

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#410

I loved this story so cute! And our lovely ASR is adorable in this story and super crazy KKG! I read this in 2 days absolutely loved it.
Hope you write another story like this.

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