[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: Cruise Adriana (Moved to Blog) - Page 14

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR

I'm hooked to this story!!! It is sooo intense and interesting...and the twists are so unexpected... Ur writing s brilliant as always... Can't wait to read more...

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

I did make an res post cupcake, I will read it NOW! AND EDIT IT NOW!

Originally posted by: chanellepears

oh boy!!!!

wat a twist 👏

never ever saw that one coming...ur writing s pure bliss smitz...this story s simply the bst!!! ❤️

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Marvellous!

*clap* *clap* *clap*

I owe it to you to make me so emotional!

Girl, now I can honestly say that you have become one of my favorite writers on IF and this has become one of my Favorite stories on IF and I want it to turn out to be so good that all the readers on IF recommend it.

I have felt nothingness and believe me there is nothing left to life after that... you feel no emotions, no- nothing. There comes a time when you stop bothering about people who hurt you with their cruel words.

You have understood nothingness to the point and portrayed it in Khushi's character to the point and that's what makes me applaud you.

Losing someone just closes all the doorways of your heart where earlier feelings were present and that bcz of the person who died because of your fault.

And then on the opposite, going to the stage where you become a schizophrenic, portrayes all the hurt you felt in one big equation.

And you can't blame anyone but yourself and no one but you can help yourself through this.

Khushi should help herself in the coming chapters out of her problems and Arnav should guide her on how to face her demons while fighting his own.

Its such an emotional chapter. And how it effects a young heart is truly terrifying.

I'm really relying on you to make it a great story and I have high expectations

Keep up the good work, girl.

I love you.

Hugs,

Saraa.