Arshi SS - Break Free - *NOTE* pg 24

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Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

interesting start

so Arnav saw khushi n instantly fell for her

he then followed her home

to find her staying in a brothel???

now hes desp to help her leave

looking forward to story unfolding

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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velvetrose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

interesting concept

thanx for da pm

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bellarosa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

interesting concept

👏

plz continue soon

thanks for pm 😊

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jeyanthi123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

awesome update ...
Loved it ... Loved the character of Arnav and zarina ...
Continue soon
Waiting
Thank for pm

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Pramiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Shon, I'm really glad you started writing again, but I really have a strong feeling I read all this elsewhere. Almost exactly the same plot. Did you put it up here before? :/

If not, ek baar check for plagiarism. Just looking out for ya. ;)

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

wow a different & unique concept it seems...
loved d start..
so arnav is divorcee...
khushi is a prostitute.. though she doesnt want to b there she is forced to live there...
but arnav wil take her out of there...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...