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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Wooohhh cliffhanger 😲

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BS.ILoveYou

@BS.ILoveYou

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Nice start.. wht happens nxt??
pls update soon

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

I think Arnav left her because she was preganat but then how he is still supporting his daughter and Khushi

They didn't get married right!

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sirivalli

@sirivalli.t

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Awesome update...

Loved it...

Very well written...

Eagerly waiting for d next part...

Thanks for d pm:)

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

wow cheesy yaar u again did it.. it was an amazing update..

Arnav and Khushi meet in a random restra. and later how they have continued their relationship was so well written..
their views and thoughts over things and relationship too have changed to some extent thinking of one another.. that was a good thing .. but still i found there is a long way..

Khushi is pregnant and she is not married to him .. so will he accept the child .. or will let her live of her own with the kid..

is this the reason that they are separated..they never gt married ???

waiting for the next update...

have many questions brewing in my head .. and i ma sure the upcoming parts will answer them ..so waiting keenly..

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Amazing start of superb story.. loved the start.. would be looking forward to know the reasons for the separation of Arnav-Khushi.. their daughter molested.. Arnav won't let anything happen to his daughter..

thanks for pm 😊

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Note:

Thanks for all your comments people! I know all of you are thinking about Arnav's reaction and if he is going to accept the kid or just walk away, everything will be cleared in next chapter.

Also I want to make something clear that, in this story, each chapter will show a complete phase in our protagonist's life. First chapter showed their affair, next will show how Khushi is going to deal with her pregnancy and what happened during fifteen years, right from the birth of the kid till her molestation. I hope the title of upcoming chapters will give you some hint about how story is going to progress, chapter second is, We Were The Raizadas.

In third chapter, our beloved(don't kill me) Shyam will come in the picture too! It will give the glimpse of the turmoil our ArHi are facing whether to stand strong against this issue or try to let go what happened because their daughter is already traumatized. So, some spoilers for you people!

I hope you will enjoy this last story of mine! :D

A question regarding PMs,

Is it fine if I PM after the story is completed?

Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago

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arnavini

@arnavini

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Thank for the note but i am disappointed and sad to read that this is going to be ur last story before u get next tym of ur vacations and i hope u get it soon...