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Posted: 10 years ago
How sweet
Veryt cute os
I like the way how they met
And I like this Arnav. He is good

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ruchiii!!!🤗 there could be no better way to wish you a very Happy B'day than this lovely OS...I must thank Choti and Jigs for coming up with such a colourful OS and I thank You, Ruchi for inspiring them to write this...

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: amus5

Ruchiii!!!🤗 there could be no better way to wish you a very Happy B'day than this lovely OS...I must thank Choti and Jigs for coming up with such a colourful OS and I thank You, Ruchi for inspiring them to write this...



Amu thank you! 🤗
It was such an amazing and adorable present. ❤️
A special gift from my two dearest friends :)


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My darling Jigs and Choti

You have both left me in tears at the sheer sweetness and love apparent in every word you've written. The warmth, the happiness you've always showered on me moves me deeply. It's a blessing to have such caring, loving friends who're there with you and for you always. To share my happiness, to worry about me, to cheer for me, to empathise with me, to guide me, to laugh with me, to make me laugh at that what can't be cured.

A zest for life, a profound sense of commitment, an unwavering determination, just some of your admirable qualities which reaffirms my belief in the goodness of people.

You have always asked me to do something, so this is for you. And it can only ever be for you. Thank you ... dil se

Love you both hamesha ❤️ ❤️

A chota sa "kuch bhi" mere Jigs and Choti ke naam ...


"Arnavji!" An excited Khushi burst into their room at her usual crazy speed, nearly tripping over a pigeon feather lying on the carpet.


He looked up from his laptop at the whirlwind zipping in. She appeared ready to burst in her effervescence. Even as his resigned dil prepared to switch off his laptop, his valiant dimaag attempted to fight a rearguard action.


"Later Khushi, dekha na I'm busy?"


"Uff woh sab chodiya, pehle hamari baat suniye."


Bowing to the inevitable he slammed his screen down and said "Bolo, kya hua?"


"Accha aap pooch hi rahein hain toh hum bata dete hain, humme Amreeka jaana hai, abhi" she said giggling.


"What?! And what's with this incessant giggling you've taken to lately?" he shot out. He knew his biwi was a bit ajeeb and her mind moved in mysterious ways but this was a bit way out even for her.

"Khushi, the States is not Lukhnow where you can just sit on a train and go! You need a passport, visa ... but wait why do you want to go there suddenly?" he quizzed, bemused at this bizarre, even for her, desire.


"Woh kya hain na Jigsji aur Chotiji wahan hain aur unhone humein bulaya hain. Toh humein unse milne jaana hain."


"What_the?! Who on earth are they? And how do you know them?"

"Mere sabse pyaare dost hain woh Arnavji." Khushi said smiling fondly.

Hearing this caused further bewilderment to Arnav. "But you've never mentioned them before. I don't know them."


"But they know us very well Arnavji. They've written a biography about our life and have even published an excerpt. Haye reading it brought back such happy memories. How we met ... Wait! My Jaanu, why can't I ride it anymore? Bablu will give it back to me. I'm sure he'll understand. Hamari kamayi ki thi woh scooty. Aur Happyji ..."


"Shut up Khushi, I want to know about Jigs and Choti" he ground out attempting to stop Khushi from veering off into pastures new.


"Arnavji, they understood our feelings so well. They even knew how you were feeling! And that is amazing na?! Aap dil ki baat kabhi kehte hi nahin. Aapne khat likha tha kya unhe, lekin apke keede makode wali likhayi unhone kaisi samjhi? Accha aap ne voice recording bheji hogi. Is that ..."


"Khushi, I'm warning you. Get to the point. How. Do. You. Know. Them?" he ground out.


"Hum unhe shaadi mein mile the. Woh kya hain na Baaraat mein hum sab saath the, aur baat karte karte hum bohot acche dost ban gaye. Humari khoob saari baatein hoti hain din bhar. Toh I want to go on a mini vacation with them. I love them dammit" she finished triumphantly.


At which point Arnav quickly realised he needed to handle this carefully. His wife was serious and once she had a plan in her head ... her DM herself would be unable to dissuade her.


"Khushi ... " he began cautiously, "why don't we discuss this properly later..."


"Nahin! kuch discuss karne ki zaroorat nahin hain. I want to go bas. Aap hamari itni si baat bhi nahin maanenge?" she pouted with a slight catch in her voice. A single tear all ready to roll down those porcelain cheeks.

Much as he tried to keep it at bay, a swirl of Rabba Ve rose to a crescendo around them.


"Khushi tum ... " he began huskily reaching out to cup her face.

"Rehne dijiye, hum khud kar lenge. Hamare paas dupatta ... uh roomal hai" she sniffed, turning away dejectedly.


Dammit how dare she walk away when I'm talking to her?! Even as he opened his mouth to remonstrate, his inner voice cautioned - Control Arnav control, this needs to be handled delicately. Lambi saans andar ...


"Khushi why don't we go together once I ... "


"Such mein Arnavji? Yay! Let me go Skype them the good news!"


'You now how to Skype?!" he asked incredulously.

"Ji, hum Chotiji ko poochte hain aur woh kuch karti hain aur phir hum Jigsji aur unki awaaz saath saath sun sakte hain. Kyon? Aapko nahin aata?"


"What_the! Of course aata hain. I'm Arnav Singh ...!"


Khushi interrupted his infamous pompous statement with a "Pata hain, Pata hain" while dashing off to unearth her phone from wherever Laxmiji may have buried it.

Arnav promptly strode after her determined to get to the bottom of this, with his inner voice snickering away - You were Arnav Singh Raizada old chap! As you had once proclaimed, love can reduce anyone to anything ... right? Joru ke Gulam Raizada?


Brushing it aside furiously, he reached the poolside to find Khushi whispering on the phone.


"Hamara plan successful hua! Arnavji ne haan kehdi! Woh hamare saath aayenge! Ab aap jee bharkar unka makeover kar sakte hain. Baal kat sakte hain. Woo hoo!!!"


Khushi knows how to woo hoo?! thought Arnav feeling more and more like things were slipping completely out of control. He hit the speed dial on his blackberry. But before he could say anything, Aman leapt in,


"It's all arranged sir. As per Ma'am's instructions, I've booked both of you on the morning flight tomorrow for Chicago. Have a good vacation sir. Jigsji and Chotiji are amazing people. You will really like them sir."


"You know them Aman?! Seems like everyone but me is privy to the goings on in my wife's life!"


Before he could continue with his rant, Khushi rushed up to him.


"Arnavji, hum aapse bhi, I love you dammit" and planted a soft kiss on his stubble. By the time it struggled through the maze of hair to reach his actual cheek, and Rabba Ve began it's journey through his veins, his biwi was already long gone.


Peering into her phone, tapping away furiously with a silly look on her face ...

Edited by Arshi67 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Say what?!?!??! What do we have here?





Where do I start? Almost a day later, after reading your first tale several times... I am still loss for words. And you know that is rare for me... after all we can talk for hours.


But seriously... your wrote, and that too for Choti and I?!?!?! I am still in shock 😲, tears still make cloud my eyes every time I think about it 😭 and then I can't stop smiling when I think about what you have written, a big smile from ear to ear one that crinkles the eyes 😃.


This was absolutely brilliant for your debut, yes don't think you are off the hook... yeh dil maange more dammit. And if that means Choti and I have to write you a OS over and over again, we shall do it, kyun baacha? Because you just confirmed what we have been saying for the longest time... you have the gift and talent to write so very well and with a flair of elegance to it that touches a person's soul... first with your comments and now this. It is always genuine and heartfelt.

So what do you say? 😉


This story screams of us and our friendship in so many ways... I loved every bit of it from the words to the punctuations... the giggling, Skype, mini vacation, Chicago... ahhh so many memories with an added bonus which included our Arnav and Khushi. I will savor this sweet, cute, funny, well written tale, Hamesha!


I love you so very much, my Bellissima 🤗 ❤️



Edited by Chokri_ASR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know it sounds bad that the first thing out of my mouth when I saw this was "Oh my god, *bleep*", but I swear it was out of excitement- I was just so freaking thrilled that you finally wrote this! I am both teary eyed, laughing and utterly honored that you dedicated this to us and god, I wish I could shower you in hugs and kisses.

You are incredibly talented, Ruchi Di. This Arnav and Khushi had me smiling from beginning to end, and as Asha would say- I just wanted to pinch this story's cheeks! It was so cute, and so very fitted to us. I couldn't contain my laughter when I was reading this- your sense of humor shines through. The ending, with her giggling at the phone and Arnav rolling his eyes... ah, I can totally see that happening 😆


Your characters were lovely- this Khushi was so adorably innocent and conniving in the cutest possible way. She was so self satisfied and I just- I'm still laughing, one day later! I loved your indulgent Arnavji, who's baffled as to how to deal with this rather odd situation... he's like an egg, hard on the outside, soft on the inside.


I loved it. I loved it, I loved it, I loved it! Every single line. I will cherish this- not just because it's from you, but because it's really, truly fantastic writing. I didn't want it to end, so... I have a proposition: for every chapter Di and I write, you write one too? How's that? Lagi shart?




I am still a little lost for words- I am just so proud of you. I couldn't be happier. It makes me so, so thrilled to res on your first story, and here's to many more.

Lots and lots of love, hamesha,
Your Choti.


P.S.: We told you so!


Edited by chotidesi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!!! Ruchi!! Meri Jaan! You wrote a story! I love it dammit! :) Will come back in a bit!
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Ok, so I am back after a bit. :)

Ruchi, that you can write and write so well is no surprise at all. All one has to do is read your comments - they are poetry in motion on the page.

I am always inspired and awed by the way language simply yields to you, pliable to your demands. Your ability to pick the most important from what has been said is meaningful.

That you so seamlessly wove two languages within your story is a testament to your ability to tell a story.

That you created a setting which was funny, sentimental and emotional is telling of storytelling abilities.

I loved the short story you penned. ❤️

I am humbled that you told me about it. :) and here I am in my favorite role - writing a comment in response to your writing. 👏 ❤️

Now my dear friend, you have no excuse what so ever for not sharing your stories with us.

I loved every bit of it. Bas.
Edited by Mirabell - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ruchi...
With every new dawn comes a new light...
This is what happened this morning...
Dawn of a new writer...👏👏👏
Simply superb...⭐️

At my age... 😉
One must ration one's excitement... 🤢
Is not what I want to say... 😆
Here is what I want to...
Seems a pity to miss such a good pudding...😃

As Robert Cormier said...The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. You can always do it better, find the exact word, the apt phrase, the leaping simile...
But... You got it right at your first shot and you have the ability to use right word at the right time from your quiver of words which is full...😛

Your write up is just like this...

And like this...


Kappish???


This write up was just =

😆

Want to see a lot more...😉 😃

The thank you note was just top class...👍🏼

Edited by rulama - 10 years ago

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