OS SERIES : With all due FARAQS! [OS 6 PG57 ] *AWARDED*

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#71

witty one i must say..

perfect blend of asr of initial days and arnav of pre wedding days..

loved ittt

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Mindblowing update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

u r such a teaser... i really thought they are gonna do something at least a lip kiss but no...

Any way the OS was superb and ya in your fried way...

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Arrey I was just wandering around IF and then I saw that this OS has been converted into a series. I was so thrilled Jiji and then I saw the update and then my name... yay!! Thank you for the dedication Jiji... Happy Friendships Day to you too and you know I love you dammit!! 🤗

Coming back to the OS series concept, love the idea. There was so much in IPK I wish to see rewritten and the way you are dealing with it is super hot. I am loving this flirty Raizada who can't keep thoughts of Khushi away from his head. Love this bold Khushi is all prepared to give back more that what she gets.

This entire OS was so hot, especially that song... gosh! I cannot imagine how Arnav must have felt seeing Khushi dressed in his personally designed clothes. The way you write the sizzling chemistry between them is too good Jiji. It makes me imagine the entire scene in front of my eyes.

I love this series and would like you to update as often as you can... will be waiting!!

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Amazing OS. It was super sexay😉 I can imagine Khushi's condition seeing Raizada with top two buttons of his shirt open
The punishment was super hot.☺️
I like this version of IPK scenes more.😊

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Dat is not lame J:) its superb utterly butterly delicious:) loved the so asr-ish ASR:)

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Thx dear.. I will be waiting for ur version which will b a lot more eventful , I'm sure of it!! 😉

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Amazing update...That was a wonderful punishment... ☺️

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Haye u call this lame? Now my question, are you even sane? Who ever calls this lame? This?! Yaar chechi so awesome and New.

Ha have your fill! Seriously Gupta you are too slow. Ofc Arnav has to take the reigns. Punishment for spilling the beans.

Special walk with him! Style and model.only for the Raizada! Right!

I liked that conversation or the banter that followed. Oh as you wish?! Lap dance! Lap dance makes me remember Jhalak! Lol that was one rofl moment.

So finally a glimpse of the punishment. Did she want more? I am sure he would have given more without any terms and conditions!

This was AWESOME! Okay? So write this at least randomly as you have mentioned. Would love to read more on this!

Write something on that suhaag raat part, that finally turned very serious. On that too please babes.. make it like this! Or whatever else you wanna write one.

Thanks again for this os <3

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Wow that was fried in the way i love.

Fried riceji you should right all there fights with such sensual twist.

Please add there fight in office store room where Khushi threatens to leave for Lucknow to your list. Pretty please.