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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Lovely one shot.

I love the way Arnav and khushi started their relation with friendship and then later this relation becomes so strong and they accepted each other as a couple and lovers, later they become complete when angel Amber brightened their life more. Their slow sweet steps to each other for trust, respect, love and care and their confession was adorable.

All the best Astha Di

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

best of luck asthu for a wonderful life ahead

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

👏

I'm back 😉😉

Komal di ..that was beautiful..

The way you desrcibed the story was.fabulous..👍🏼

The relationship from strangers to friends to husband and wife and then to one soul...was outstandingly written ...

Well done ...I'm sure astha di would love this ...😳

Everything was just perfect ..

It described changed that happen in your life and how madly in love you be with that change in some span.of time..

Well.done 👏

Thanks for pm...😳

PERFECT is the word i give to your story ...😉

Edited by bs1224 - 11 years ago

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

So beautiful OS !!!!

Loved it...!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

that was one beautiful os...!!!

so cute.. and beautiful

and very, very, well written.. just loved it!

great job!👍🏼

best of luck... astha for your life ahead...

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

its awesome and fantastic os...loved it komal...the way u have showed the different stages of their first ...outstanding...loved it...very very nice...thanks pooji for the link...best wishes to astha :)