Arshi OS: Just Making Sure I am the One - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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How insecure she is after one year of marriage. Hasn't he done anything to alllay her fears after one year, she still feels like this. What a horrible marriage to be in. That she has to prove herself to be the one with sex!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alwaysforarshi

How insecure she is after one year of marriage. Hasn't he done anything to alllay her fears after one year, she still feels like this. What a horrible marriage to be in. That she has to prove herself to be the one with sex!



wowww lolll!

Lets go through this again, this complexity wasnt always there. I believe I clearly stated it was since the ex was brought up and I think everyone to some extent at some point for a while get insecure and bothered. I know I would.

Yeah if she was always insecure then that would be a horrible marriage agreed. In this particular story no, they were a normal couple...quite in love with each other. My intention was to portray a usual jealousy/insecurity and how she dealt with it. Normally its the attraction...beauty that puts women in such complexes. It was about control...everyone has different places where theyre controlling or need to have that sense of authority.

LoL I never thought I would ever have to defend my story! Buttt I am really really glad you commented. Thanks. I like every kind of feedback :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Loved it! So funny as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is beautifully written.
From Khushi's insecurity to their love making (really hot BTW☺️) to him finally figuring it all out.
Wonderful
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so cute. Aww kushis insecurity had benefited Arnav. Glad that kushi didn't behave like a.typical wife instead she tried to feel better by being with him. And needless to say, it was a hot encounter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i adore ur version of arnav and khushi, lovely os 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Me likes the Khushi in action, It is always Arnav who is in control but this Khushi me really liked.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Really sweet. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Amazing...😃
I loved totally Khushi's possessive side😈 she gets so naughty!!!😆
-Really well written, you captured the moment beautifully!!!❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Amazingly written. This was nice role reversal, to see her being that over-possesive one amongst the two.
And what a way to show and prove that she's the one.
Waiting to read more of your work. 😊

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