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This is an old OS of mine which I had written for my friend ...Gunjan... on her birthday. I am posting it in other thread for my nishu di who got married recently! Wishing you a blissful life ahead di :)


OS : A Walk To Remember


The sky lightened up as if lit up by fire. The sun, like a large, grandeur orange fireball in the distance partially cloaked by the hanging clouds, which were all splashed with the random colors of hot pinks, reds and even hints of purples and blues. The way was silent, just the way he liked. Walking along the way, he felt the cold evening breeze calming his senses. Putting his hands inside his trouser's pockets, he looked up at the sky & smiled.

As he walked on, he started thinking of his life. From child of a mere farmer, today he was the owner of a multinational company. He accomplished in raising everyone's collar in his family with proud by topping in his subject in University. His dad, his lips curved into a smile on its own. Only god knows what would have happened without his dad. When his mother passed away, his dad was the one who hadn't lost hope. He never married another woman because he did not wanted a step mom for his children. He had always supported him through the thick & rough times of life. Moreover, it gave him immense pleasure to know that his dad was proud of what he was today. Well everything was possible only because of him.

Then his thoughts drifted to his di. His smile converted into a grin now & he shook his head. God help his poor jijaji, he chuckled remembering how his di made him run after her while she was pregnant. Avni, a serene smile spread on his face. The adorable, cute lil pie. He couldn't help but remember when avni was 4 & his di was expecting her second child. How cutely she had asked her mother

'Mummy why are you so fat?'

'Because there's a baby in my tummy.'

'Mum, do you love the baby?'

'Of course, baby. I love her'

'Then why did you eat her at the first place?'

And everyone had burst out laughing. Those days were the best days of his life. He sighed. His di left with his jiju & settled in USA. Though she did pay him a visit once in a year but he missed them a lot...

Twinkling laughter of a woman brought him out of his own world. He looked in the direction of the sound & saw a woman, probably in her late twenties, playing with a small girl. On his own accord, he started moving towards them, near the shore. The lady had long silky hairs reaching below her waist. Her mischief laden hazel eyes now completely focused on the lil girl before her. The lil girl probably said something that made her laugh throwing her head back. Pinching the chubby cheeks of the lil girl, she whispered something, which sounded like

'You are so cute'

Now he was able to see her properly. She looked enticing in the yellow sundress she was wearing. It made her look like a college girl. Now standing only half a feet's distance away from her, he watched as she moved back, playing with the lil girl.

She probably didn't notice him & so while moving back, collided with him & before falling he caught her...like he had been doing since few years of now.

'Daddy' the lil girl came running towards him & hugged his legs & he looked at her with affection.

'What arnav? You are late, again' his wife gave him an adorable pout.

'Sorry khushi. I got busy in my work. But See I came at the right time' he told her, gesturing her that she was in his arms.

'Aise he sambhaloge na mujhe?'

'Hamesha...'

He freed his wife & picked up his daughter in his arms. The three walked along, laughing, hugging each other. A perfect family time they were having. A perfect family of three!





P.S. Imagine his daughter's name to be Vandana😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow.. dee.. that was so cute os...😃 but very short
loved how you described arnav's inner feeling about his families.. so he was farmer's son and now businessman..
I first thought, he was going meet khushi.. that maybe it was their first meet but she was his wife and that li'l girl his daughter.. so beautiful twist⭐️
really.. loved it👏⭐️
beautifully written⭐️⭐️
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DJ ji aap great ho ji 😃 when I started off I thought ASR would meet Khushi for the first time in this OS but I was wrong 😆 I loved it ❤️
I loved the description about the whether...whenever I read such description about the whether.it makes me feel pleasant 😃
It was totally awesome...I loved it
Short but sweet 😳

PS: AREY WAO KYA BAAT HAI!!! I am scondwa 😆 😳
Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yay.. me first.. update soon dee :) waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful story Dee.

Edited by opsyellow - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😆 its the OS u wrote for my Bday so i have read it before still commenting i didn't got to say much about it before na due to examwa -_-

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i read it again !
i loved the starting description about atmosphere how the place and sky was
i loved how his dad supported him all along
even i though he met her for first time 😆😳
totally cute and sweet one 😃 and i loved these kind of OS
beautifully written too :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dee, lovely story. A feel happy and felt so complete...a wonderful insight to their family of 3. Loved how you incorporated the sambhal tha rahoonga scene here...and I loved the way he describes her ..I did not realise they were married ...till then...
Loved the parts where he is reminiscing about his life ...the entire part about his father and his Di. The poor jijaji and the adorable 4 year old with the innocent questions...loved that part where she asks why did she eat up the baby...
Such a feel good and happy story. 👏
Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res for kiran di
Unres

Cute and simple OS.
Loved it Dee 😊

Arnav thinking about his life right from him being
the son of a farmer to becoming a business man.
Anjali and her sweet little daughter asking why her
mother was fat!

The part I loved most was the way you described
Khushi playing with their daughter and the 'hamesha
sambhalta rahungaa..'
🤗
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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unres'd by lolwa

Arey wao kya baat hai dee .. Awsm OS .. Ye hui naa baat vananda arnav ki baiti 🤣 haha .. I liked it .. Cute wali OS <3 <3
😃
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago
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res for hina
oops.. she res'd on page 4😃
Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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