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Hey guys!

So i am starting a new SS.

Hope you all will support me with this one too..😳

Prologue

Smiles.. The name with which she was known as. More than her name people addressed her with this nick-name which her sister had given her. And that name so very matched her persona. She was a girl filled with life and joy. He smile as bright as sun rays which could brighten everyone's day. Her kindness and the eagerness to help anyone with anything was the other thing other than her smile which would win everyone's heart.



But to day this very person was not like what she used to be. The pale looking figure, in that light blue hospital gown which made her look more dreaded was there fighting between her life and death. Her husband, the renowned businessman, the richest and the most powerful person of the city could do nothing. He was helpless and all that money which he earned for his family couldn't do anything to save his spouse's life. His family was by his side giving him some solace but only he knew how much he was dieing inside seeing his wife like that.


Just then a petite pale figure walked in and she was non other than his wife's elder sister. Face drenched with tears, pale skin and those dry lips and that horrified look on her face made him feel more helpless. She reached them and standing by Anjali, her sister's sister in law asked all what was in her mind..


" How is my sister, Di? How is Smiles? What did the doctors say? Is there any progress?" she asked all in one go feeling more nervous than she ever was and what she got in reply was just a helpless nod.


They were all waiting for the doctor to be out and tell them how was everything inside when they heard a baby cry. Their pale faces broke into a smile as they knew the baby was all safe and is born.. But what about it's mother? They all became ore restless as realization hit them. After about 15 minutes they saw the red light being off and saw the doctor walking out.. They all went toward the doctor with a questioning face and they felt the earth stop.. They felt as though the earth was been slipped off their feet.


"Sorry we tried out best but couldn't save her.. She's no more.."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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UnRes!

Dear Ros,
I hope it's not Khushi who is smile and rather her sister to be Khushi (the elder sister)
The reason is I don't wanna live in flashback...
You know what I mean?!
Like if that girl was Khushi who died, then the story will live in past with flashbacks nah 😳
I hope you understand what in saying 😉

🤣
I know who smiles is 😆 (that's me fore sure)

Why did I just write things above like that 😲 (a letter format)
Really ?! 🤣

Awesome start dear .. You will get everyone to support and specially me so don't worry 🤗
Edited by LoveARR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart breaking prologue please tell me it not khushi who died congrats thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Such a sad prologue...
I'm guessing the woman who died is Arnav's wife and Khushi's sister called Muskaan? And the girl who came to speak to Anjali is Khushi?
Anyway, you always get these wonderful ideas dear! I'm waiting for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sad hope its not khushi who died 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sad prologue.hope its not khushi who died.continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hay u said smile ? smile means kushi right tat means she is been admitted in the hospital bed? plz 4r the starting it self u made me say WAT THE? plz update the part ya eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome prologue...cant wait to read more
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So sad.hope she is not khushi.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm...it was not kushi who died.plz plz say i am right???
i have a feeling it can be arnav 1st wife and kushi will be his 2nd and kushi & that lady sisters...onlt my feeling
looking forward to the next part

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