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Mahnoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful...
U have pen down Khushi's feelings so beautifully that they seem realistic to me...I could easily imagine Everything taking place in front of my eyes...their hesitant to bold gazes...Her shyness...Her reluctance n at the same time feeling to be bold...random but beautiful...

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Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing OS 👏

Loved it!

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-Catharsis

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Posted: 12 years ago

And I, Miss Del, am falling for your writings.

This actually gave me butterflies. Wow! What a talent!😊

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Deepa jha

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Posted: 12 years ago

When I read the title, I was actually humming colbie calliat's falling for you.

And as I finished reading, saw you posted the same😛

Anyways, Loved the OS😊

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

Brilliant narration! Very sensual..

Jab husband wife are in love, to kya karega contract. Yes!

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katunkka

@katunkka

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Posted: 12 years ago

This is such a sexy update, just like khushi.

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greenMoss

@greenMoss

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Posted: 12 years ago

I loved the way how you so beautifully described the intricacies of her feelings, her attraction and her slowly falling in love.

"She was falling in love with her husband, after all.."

Perhaps the husband has already fallen and risen in love with her.

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