Tainted #2- Chapter Seventeen- Roy

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-Mistletoe-

@-Mistletoe-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

You're back! You're back! *dances crazily*

Rafa, I missed 'tainted' so much.

Though I have read till Chapter 24 on your blog, being one of your privileged readers - Im so happy you've reposted this on IF. This masterpiece deserves all the attention and appreciation it can get. Nevertheless, I read this Chapter 17 again. And like it happens every time I read a chapter of your story - I was left amazed at the sheer brilliance and perfection of your writing.

3 times and counting - thats the number of times I have read, re-read, re-re-read those 24 chapters. I understand the characters so much better now.

So, will you stop updating on the blog now that you've decided to repost Tainted on IF? And when are you updating anyway? Chapter 25? More than a month its been. :(

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Thanku so much 4 posting here in IF...
I ws very sad when u moved it 2 a blog...
Anyway nw I'm happy...
Lookn 4ward 2 read more... 😊

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simran

@crazymg.04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice one! Thanks for the pm.

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

I've read this chapter before on the blog, and it definitely is one of my favourites, so I read it again, here. And this time again, IR brought me to tears, to feel what your characters feel, its so painful, so heart wrenching, its impossible to not feel miserable , to not shed a few tears, to not ponder over fate.

Such a beautifully heart wrenching chapter.

love
sonia

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Gosh!! How a kid grew up & perceived his father's thoughts too strictly.

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SADYA41

@SADYA41

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

The update was very powerful. Made me cry when akash told mahinder why he killed his own mother. But I think I'm going to have to read all the parts again to refresh my memory as it has been so long since I read them

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achu_arshi

@achu_arshi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

it is really amazing letters!!

i quite like Akash in this chapter

God knows why?

by the way i miss arshi, hope to see them in next chapter :D

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

new thread for tainted!

You updated after a long time.

this chapter is too heart wrenching.

what a dark life this under world people lead!

A mother can be killed by her own son or a father can train his son to be a murderer.

Mano's life is too tragic and so as mahinder's. He loved Mano so much, but couldn't fulfill her wish.

Mshinder's letters to mano are really very emotional.

awesome writing.

thanks for the PM.

Edited by sohara - 12 years ago

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ada_r

@ada_r

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

I am so glad you brought this story back. So so glad.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Why do I have the feeling that i have read this.. i think it might be through your blog.. beautifully written..

Akash's words of why killed his mother.. made me cry...