OS: Look Me In The Eye

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

brilliant update even d music

lik khushi's attitude alot

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Mini17

@Mini17

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome and very cute especially, the sweet kiss!
You could actually continue this, you know!? 😉
Do I have to say anything about the music? ❤️
And the last line is so powerful, intense and superb! 👍🏼

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Lovely OS..❤️ And the music added to its beauty...

Edited by mishti_17 - 12 years ago

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Lovely OSPerfect...Loved it

*If u have index,Plz PM me the link*

Edited by chandana.s - 12 years ago

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: sj_arhi
It was lovely. BEAUTIFUL instrumental manh, very soothing. The story was perfect for the song. If Khushi played this piece live, I would love to see ASR's facial reaction. Well ASR got his match in KKG finally; Anjali was made the witness to it.

PS: Since I converse with you quite often, I wanted to know what name I could address you by.

You can call me Yoshi :)

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hi! 😊

Seriously where do you get these wonderful ideas from? You are so talented and this OS is brilliant. 👏 I so wish you could continue this as a short story or fan fiction. I would love to read what Arnav would do to get his match, Khushi in his life. ⭐️

P.S. Thank you for sending me PM of your work whenever you write something new. 😊

Edited by Rimz_k09 - 12 years ago

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sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

superb OS :)

thanks for the PM

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

She made him say first it was good, I said it was good then its brilliant, perfect and you were right. Khushi can make him do this and yes she gave him and another history by made him say.Arnav Singh Raizada has met his match .Nice OS