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Okay... this is my first time ever writing something like this. I did this for a practice run and honestly... I am not sure whether I did good. Lol. You guys read it and tell me. :)

Hatred Dipped With Honey

He pushed her against the wall, breathing in her scent, passionately pressed against her soft body.

"What did you just say?" He whispered menacingly pressing her closer to him, for her to feel the beat of his aching heart. Their breaths collided together in sync, becoming one at the heat they were releasing.

She twisted her body trying to pry off his strong sensual hands away from her body. Tips of his fingers stroked her bare waist, sending electrical trails down her back. Her eyes sharply focused on his molten brown one's. Fire was exchanging between the two of their gaze. Her red lips spoke with the same menace as him, ''I said, I hate you Arnav Singh Razaida. Do you want me to scream it out to you?"

The word 'hate' sent more fire to his nerves and rough manly hands ripped off her sari pallu revealing her bare, creamy stomach. She gasped at his action as her chest breathed in more hot air. His torturing lips bent down to her ears washing down more hot air to her swan like neck. Whispers of pleasure traveled to her ears as his husky voice spoke, ''never say those words to me every again. Do you understand me Khushi Singh Razaida? Ever.''

Her eyes closed at the pleasure he caused with his voice. Clenched fists grabbed a hold of her sari, grasping it to survive her emotions. With great difficulty she found her voice as she replied back to him, breathless, ''I will say it again and again if I have to Mr. Arnav Singh Razaida. Until you are deaf to your ears."

Her reply made his insides turn with more anger and before she could comprehend what was happening, his soft lips attacked her neck. Open mouth kisses washed down on her neck, trailing low towards her cleavage. His sharp teeth nipped, and bit her smooth skin, marking her as his own. She shuddered at his touch, biting her lips to prevent herself from moaning out his name.

Strong desires aroused and he lost all his sense; with one swift move he carried her to their bed, and gently laid her down. Eyes focused on her shivering lips he bent down and captured them with his own. An almost gasp left out from her mouth, but it was cut off from his torturing mouth, attacking her own. His tongue licked and bit her lips, begging for entrance. Their bodies moved together, fighting to take control, but she was losing underneath him. Her innocent fingers ripped off his shirt impatient to touch his hard rock body. Imitating her movements, he fully threw away her draped sari. Both, half naked, waiting to be one. Unable to resist his pleading lips, she opened her mouth, for his grand entrance.

Their tongues collided, wrestling with each other, desperate to taste the love they had. Slowly and sensually they danced together with their bodies, and their lips; thanking the heavens for the pleasure they felt. Several minutes of pure bliss, he pulled away from her sweet lips, to attack her half naked body.

Gentle fingers stroked her body, as she gasped his name, begging him to stop torturing. Her melodic voice tempted him more, and he bent down to wash her with more open mouth kisses; sucking on her stomach, her neck, and her almost bare breasts. As his lips lowered more, his fingers tried to pull down her under skirt, but his mind forced him to stop. He looked up at her, and he saw her eyes still tightly shut, whispering his name. Slowly he pressed his body to her own, and he whispered, ''Khushi... open your eyes..."

She nodded her head, denying his request. Bending down, his lips kissed her soft cheeks and again he whispered, '' please angel... I need you to look at me when I say this..." His words caught her attention and cautiously, and shyly she opened her eyes. Their brown, desire filled eyes met, and their bodies shook with anticipation.

His voice whispered to her in a serious tone, "I only love you Khushi... do you understand, only you. No one in this world matters to me, but you. Stop denying the truth and believe me Khushi... I only love you. I am yours only. Forever and always."

Trickling tears dropped to the bed and she whispered, '' promise?'' A smile spread across his face, and he lowered his lips, once again to her ear, when he whispered, '' I promise." She smiled against his cheek and she cupped his face, to face her.

"Now make me yours again, take us to another world,'' she whispered desperately. He nodded and, pulled down her under skirt, gently unhooked her sari jacket, and he kissed her once more.

That night their passion, their love, their pleasure, their trust, became one. Fading away their storms that were set upon their lives.

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I was so shy to post this because I don't write much like this lol. It's a new thing for me.. so give me your feed back on the comments. I am actually blushing while I re-read this to edit. :p Oh lord. Hope you guys enjoy ya gutter minds. LOL No worries, I am one too thanks to IPK. :P lol


Ps: I wrote this for the current track. In this OS Khushi is angry and jealous towards this 'woman' The kid is not Arnav's and the woman is just a friend. I am not going in to details about that because that you guys can make up something for that. I just wanted to write the passion in this Arhi fight.

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MrDarcyfan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing! It was SO intense!
Maria. thumbnail
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So Romantic and beautifully written
loved it
reallyhappy thumbnail
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lovely OS..:)if der lov z tru..he wud neva cheat her..if der lov z tru..she wud trust him..no mttr wteva d world says..ol in ol..i want dis jealous insecure Khushi in d shw as well..:)btfl OS..:)nuthin cn eva cum b/w Arshi..:)
mishti_17 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice one.. Loved it.. And good job.. It was so so intense...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😛 😳 ☺️ 🤪🤪🤪... ❤️ 👍🏼 ... i hope d track goes like u've anticipated ... i can't tolerate Arnav 2 be physically related 2 any woman in past ,present or future except my KKGSR !!!!!
kriti_atharv thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow that was hawwwt...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully written buddy...thumbs up 2 u...dnt worry...even i blushed wen i readi it but it's not vulgar or anything like that...
Yashu_Sobti thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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It was beautiful... U wont believe me I was blushing the whole while while reading this...beautiful dear!!😉👏
claireDD thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omfg...that was haaawwwttt😳...
you've never written lemon ever before...
well theres always a first time..
and i was ☺️☺️ the whole time...

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