OS:GOOD NEWS pt 4

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ana-twilight

@ana-twilight

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

goood..
plz cont part 3 soon..😊

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Lovely. A;ways a treat to read os's on preggy Khushi.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awww they are taking such good care of her
but she hates to sit in one place
well her being khushi and always going here and there that is bound to happen
loved the surprise they gave her
do continue pls

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nida

@fattou

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice part 😊

update soon n PM me

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SamAina_yudkbh

@SamAina_yudkbh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

one suggestion.

ur os is good.

just write it in paragraphs. its very difficult to read it in one single para. whenever there r dialogs, put punctuation marks. e.g. i am taking few llines from ur os for showing u what i mean.

slept in to each other arms.both were very happy.the feeling of being parents is the best feeling.next morning, arnav woke first and he was about to leave the bed when he saw the innoccent face of his wife.she was looking beautiful.arnav moved forward to place a kiss on her forehead.suddenly the door knocked.

anjali's voice came from outside

"chote hum khushi ji ke liye dood laye hain darwaza kholien"

on his di's voice arnav opened the door. anjali came in.and go to khushi made her wake up.khushi slightly opened her eyes. as she saw di she quickly tried to get up.but due to weakness she could not.arnav and anjali scolded her and said that she should take care.khushi drank the milk and anjali was gone.khushi was about to leave the bed when arnav hold her hand.

''as i told u last night that u r not allowed to do anything then why r u not listening''

.khushi : "arnav jii hum bikul theek hain''.

arnav : "haan wo to main dhek sakta hoon.chup chap yahan lat jao."

khushi made faces and said " to kiya hum no maa tak bed per hi lete rahein."

arnav "shahid haan tub tuk jab tum bikul theek hoo jao"

'khushi looked angry . arnav sat beside her and said:" khushi doctor ne kaha he ke tum weak ho ur tumhe iram ki zarurat hain or main tumhare bar maein koi risk nahi lina chahta "

.on this arnav placed a kiss on her forehead and left for office.