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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Rachel what was that ???
I'm so confused after reading this OS !
First I thought that It was something inspired from Thriller (MJ forever 😃)!!
And I loved it, I was shiverring reading the whole part ! It was so thrilling and scary ! 😃😃
Bit disappoint when I realized that it was in fact a nightmare 😆😆 !
But then 😕😕
Arnav commited suicide ???
Khushi met his ghost, and Arnav's ghost kissed her !!
Why didn't he did that when he was alive ???
Yes it's something completely different !
But it's not bad 😃
It's just that I'm still in Arush OSs so I didn't expect you to write something like that !
I think what you wanted to express trhough this OS, is something that Arnav and Khushi's minds were linked, so that's why Khushi felt that Arnav was no more a human thanks to the nightmare !
And also that Arnav was in love with Khushi or was attracted to her, that's why he came to kiss her after dying !
But Why did he commit suicide ??
I don't know why but I didn't like Arnav in this OS, he's quite scary and troubled 😆😆 !
Anyway nice OS 😉😉
PS : well usually I don't ask you to continue an OS (you're already so busy with MIRAGE) but I would like to know more about this Arnav who commited suicide !!
PPS : hope that you're no more depressed 😉😉
🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
😲 that was extremely creepy and interesting. Totally different from the other OS i've read. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Hey this was different and creepy ...lab scene was awsm !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
I almost got scared reading this.. I will be content with the fact that they united after death..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
that was creepy...i am not gonna able to sleep now🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
ops... whats that 😲😕

that was scary...

surely this is the result of using that 13 century computer 😆

it is entirely different but i liked that 😉

aww the scary Arnav said that

"You shouldn't have been running away from me. This is your house."

he surely has some traits of our sexy and adorable Arnav

but yar what happened at the end??? how come he ended up with suicide??? 😕

and wow he came back to her just to kiss her

loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Rachel- Grrr!😈
But loved ur style of writting 😉

The moment Khushi collided with Arnav in her dreams- I knew that Arnav is dead! I am intelligent ; aint I?? Haridwaar se pass kia he mein😆

But never thought he wd commit suicide or smbody wd kill him😔
Truely U r the thriller queen- infact shocker queen😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
its really different dear. U write horror genre well also . I was sacred reading it. But could u pls mix some romantic stuff with the horror ones ;) it would be more interesting :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
woah! rach! that was spooky and scary...
eesh!...
thanks to you i have to hold him tight and sleep...😕
well some one will be thankful to you ...😆

but very good...i swear rach what ever you will write i will definitely like it...
loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
congrats ...i just made it upto 1st para...you succeeded in scaring me...i cant read further.😲

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