TS: If there were only a night, I'd... pt2 pg2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yeh zindagi hai imtihaan

tere bina suna jahan


The familiar place looked gloomy even though the lights were switched on, but still the darkness was the master of the place. Even though there were movements, yet everything was looking constant. In spite of the changes, her mind couldn't recognize any; her thought were there- where he was. In the core of the noise, she found everything quite.


Har aaina thoota lagi hai

sach bhi humein jootha lagi hai

Jaane kahan hum aagahay hay

saara jahan rootha lagi hai

The clock turned 12 a.m. announcing the end of another day; a day which wasn't as usual. It was a day when she had lost everything, when her happiness suddenly vanished. Her each wish had gone with the storm. The awkward truth appeared out of the blue preventing any progress or sign of happiness to take a place in her life.

Her gaze was set on the clock one time and on her wedding dress another time. Praying silently to her DM, she held on her tears. He was her dua. Then a shine of hope spread around. She didn't lose the trust in him, in his love. She remembered how confident she was when she once told him that she trusts him more than herself.

If there was only a night- one night, she would survive her life, she would go to him, she would run to his embrace and wouldn't let go. If there was another night to see him, she would experience that feeling again, she would choose being with him, but the question is would he chosen her? Would he come to her? Would everything turn normal and be as it once was?

But some questions remain like this with no answer. One action may give the answer for everything. But again would that action come? And this was another question which didn't get an answer. How harmful that feeling is when you wait for a long time? How hard it is to wait for an answer, an action, for someone, for your love.

Bin tere O sajan

Suna hai mera mann

tarse dil tere liye...

I don't want to disappoint you, but this was an idea! If you want another part, do let me know.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really really nice! Would love to read the next part :) Continue soon…. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanitha


That was really really nice! Would love to read the next part :) Continue soon'. :)

Thanks a lot. I'll try to post it soon😊

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

simply amazing..loved it/;

Thank u😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start..would Love to read more..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was nice 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was really really nice!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that's really very nice
continue soon
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awesome part. plz do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I so want to give you ek ghusa😡 It was so good but then hell it so was so sad. I felt getting in there and beating that Arnav black and blue. Be nice and continue and make sure I don't get to beat Arnav.
P.S I was wondering that do you live in some other planet 'cause I rarely see you updating!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivani_Priyam

I so want to give you ek ghusa😡 It was so good but then hell it so was so sad. I felt getting in there and beating that Arnav black and blue. Be nice and continue and make sure I don't get to beat Arnav.

P.S I was wondering that do you live in some other planet 'cause I rarely see you updating!!!!!!

Firstly, thanks for the comment.
Secondly, you shouldn't have given me that ghusa. Thanks for likig it. And you don't have to beat Arnav 'cause he's going to have her and... I won't say anything, you have to wait😛
Finally, I don't know if I live in another planet, but my planet is called Earth.
I'll update soon 3 updates. Waittt
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