OS: Redemption:The True Story

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Archana

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Posted: 13 years ago

Very gud one..!!But totally unexpected climax...😆

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

EXPELLIARMUS -- Shyam really has the disarming charm and also the Alohomora charm!

He needs to be given the anti cheating spell and then the crucio and the Avada -kedevra curse!

Nice OS!

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MentalExotica

@MentalExotica

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOLing at the climax or anticlimax whatever you call it

Whatte star crossed love story this is..

You understand Shyaam Manohar Jha better than anyone else.

He is the man and his Life is a dark tunnel

Let me leave you with a song, cos that's how I roll baby!

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQ4_eH_DBSc&feature=player_detailpage#t=9s[/YOUTUBE]

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@boyznaka

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Juhiji,
I cannot describe how much overwhelmed I am right now. The way you described Shyam's pain, his confusion, his helplessness has made my heart ache for the poor man. Oh the pains of true love! Excuse me for a moment so that I may collect myself. This pain is too much ti take. Until then, I leave you with a quote that had made me cry just as much as this OS did, maybe even more. The intellect of thw person who said this being ignored tugs at my heart every time.

No one fllws me on da Twitterz.

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 13 years ago

I tend to get vary when the name is not mentioned in at least the first couple of paragraphs because I tend to mislead people in my OS's too! ;)

So Shyam, huh? And tiffin box? LMAO! That was unexpected! Loved it! Can't wait to read more! ;)

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.Kryptonite.

@.Kryptonite.

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Posted: 13 years ago

You surely should write more, this was so much fun!😆 100 points to Gliffindor yo!😉

Reason for carrying a *lunch box*: Shyam " Severus" Jha in fond memory of Khushi "Lily" Gupta's Dabba service!

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Whoa...there i was expecting something emotional...gearing up myself for something sad that what would make me go...oh no!!

But here i am...laughing away at unxpected yet fantastic end!!!very well written and yeah..,something like this was needed to set my mood right...you should write more often...:)..

P.S:yes, yes, you get the House Cup alright and the Sntich if you want...;)