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I dunno what this is but i just had frustration in me that i wanted to vent out... have no idea how it has turned out... One of my craziest writings i guess... caz i dont know if you guys might like it...

But heck, i know i had to write it... and so i did... all i can do is hope that you all like it too...


The Hunted


Reporter: I am reporting live from the Raizada residence where we have just received a terrible news that the youngest and most successful businessman Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada was murdered. Yes, you heard me right. He was brutally killed with a single stab wound to his stomach. Police are investigating the scene but our sources say that this was a very well planned murder and even though the murder weapon was recovered there are no finger prints on them. The Raizada mansion's security was being upgraded but before CCTV camera's were installed, the murderer planned and executed this cold deed. There are no witnesses and no leads. This case doesn't look like it is going to be solved soon. Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada has gone into a state of shock and hasn't eaten or spoken since yesterday. This tragedy has made her go stiff. Sources tell us that she hasn't even shown any tears or sadness. She is in a state of total shock and denial. Sources also tell us that she is sitting next to the body in their room. And a public will is to be announced today for all of Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada's possessions.





Just then Shyam manohar jha walked out looking grief struck. But all of this was just an act. He had come out to gain public sympathy as well so that the rest of the people in the raizada mansion including Akash and nani come over to his side.




Reporter: Sir, can you give us a statement. We hear you are his brother in law. Can you please answer a few questions.




A tear rolled down his cheek but happiness ruled his heart because only shyam knew that the tear was all an act.




Shyam: It is the worst day of my life where I had to see the death of my dearest brother in law. He was very close to me and he used to say that I was a role model for him. Naturally his loss has affected me the most. It is a tragedy I may not be able to bounce back from.




Shyam(thinking): ya right. All I have to do is wait for that will. After Arnav hands over everything to my stupid wife, I'll take it from her and take khushiji and escape.




Shyam laughed on the inside as he remembered how he killed the great Arnav Singh Raizada.




--------flashback------------




Arnav: Don't think I do not know what you truly are. I have stopped funding my sister and so you can even get the money.




Shyam: Who said I was interested in the money Arnav?




Arnav looked at Shyam in confusion.




Shyam: I will make you a deal. Give me 25 percent shares of AR industries and ask khushiji to come with me, then I'd leave AR forever.




Arnav: I'd rather die than let anything happen to my wife.




Suddenly the lights went out and Shyam took the knife out and stabbed Arnav. He felt Arnav struggling and then Arnav went still completely.




Shyam: I fulfilled your death wish Saale sahib.




He smirked and removed all his fingerprints from the knife and left Arnav's body there.




He then planned everything in such a way that he was the last to know what happened.




Shyam(thinking): I am a genius. Now I'll get the money and then I'll take khushiji. I don't care if she doesn't want to come. I'll kidnap her.




-----------end of flashback----------------



Shyam: Please no more questions.




Now everyone else too came out to the stage. It was a clause in Arnav's will that the will would be disclosed in the presence of the media.




The only person who was missing was Khushi as she did not leave Arnav's side even for a second. She sat all alone with the body infront of her laying on ice.




Mr.Roy: Hi everyone. It is a very tragic day that my client, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada had to die and leave us with sorrow in our hearts. Whoever did this deed will be found and punished. But we have to do this today as he told me not to wait even for a minute after his death to release his will to the public. The will is as follows,




I, Arnav Singh Raizada, declare this to be my final will before death. I am in no pressure and I declare that I am in my complete senses and that this is my final will and is irrevocable.

1. All of my personal belongings will be handed over to Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada that includes all my personal property in the USA and UK.

2. All the liquid assets under my name in various banks be handed over to Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada including my wages as CEO of AR group of industries.

3. All my personal shares that account to about 98 percent be transferred to Mr. Akash Singh Raizada making him the sole owner of AR industries. These shares will not be transferrable to someone else even if Akash Singh Raizada wishes. They will be transferrable only to his own children.

4. As my sister has a loving and caring husband all I can leave for her is my love that I will continue pouring to her from wherever I am.

5. It is my wish that my wife Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada live in one of my houses in the USA away from Raizada mansion as I do not want her to live in my memories but move on with her life.

6. None of the above clauses can be altered or changed and if any of my family members are pressurized to act against my will, then I grant my lawyer the rights to sue the person who is found guilty and put a hold on my assets.

7. None of the Raizada's except my wife will have the right to see me before I am cremated.

And that would be all.




A buzz of questions lit the place but none of the raizada's wanted to give their comments. They were all completely grief stricken.




Only one man stood rooted to the spot completely shocked at Arnav's will.





Arnav had not left a single rupee for Anjali. And he had damn well made sure that he won't be getting a single penny out of Anjali. He would have to ask akash who doesn't trust him at all. This would put a hamper on his plans.




He was angry. But atleast he got khushi. Now there was nothing that could come between his love for khushi.




He made his way silently to the room where khushi was sitting in.




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Khushi sat like a rock. It had been over 14 hours since she had heard the news and as soon as she had heard it she was broken.




She had just been married two weeks and all hell had broken loose when Anjali brought back Shyam. There had been a huge fight in the house and Anjali had even threatened Arnav with her life telling him that she would kill herself if Arnav didn't allow shyam to enter RM.




Khushi had gone to get the reports from the doctors that told her that she was pregnant. She was going to be a mother and Arnav a father.




But when she returned home happy, she lost everything that she held dear when she was told that Arnav was murdered.




She was destroyed. She couldn't breathe. She couldn't speak. She couldn't move.




Her brain was constantly playing all the memories she had of Arnav. Even the day they had consummated their marriage and had made love to each other that had finally resulted in her pregnancy.




But all was lost. Her parents had left her long ago and now Arnav had left her.




She never felt so alone in her life. The loneliness that surrounded her was choking her. She didn't want to draw a breath. She didn't want to feel. She wanted to be nestled next to her husband's body even in his death.




Payal had even slapped khushi to try and get a reaction out of khushi but khushi refused to even blink.




She was pale. It looked as though no blood ran in her veins. Her heart had stopped beating. It used to beat only for Arnav Singh Raizada, that arrogant man yet so childish in nature who had immediately won her love when she saw him the first time.




His deep eyes easily conveying to her the pain that he hid from the outside world.




The pain he only shared with her.




But now that was not possible. Those eyes would never open for her again. She would not be able to see the innocence of a young child in Arnav ever again. She would not be able to talk to him again.





Khushi choked, feeling her windpipe constricted. She wanted to die and wake up in Arnav's arms. She prayed to her Devi maiyya to kill her as well.




She had been alone next to Arnav's body covered with a white sheet.





She was alone for the last 20 minutes as everyone had left to read Arnav's will.




Suddenly she was pulled by force and before she could react someone placed his lips on hers.




---------Keep reading... cont on the next post----------

press like for this one as well if ya liked it... and do comment if possible...😊

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---------continued----------


Khushi was later found unconscious and taken to the hospital.




Everyone had immediately left as they were scared for her baby. The legacy of Arnav was inside khushi and they wanted her and the baby to survive.




Shyam on the other hand made an excuse and stayed behind. He wanted to taunt Arnav even in his death. He walked inside the room where Arnav's body was placed.




He stood beside the cloth covered body.




Shyam: Its so sad saale sahib that you died. But it was a must. You had come in between khushi and me. And I had to kill you. You are a stupid man Arnav. Taken a lot of pain to keep money from me. I don't care about the money. Somehow I'll force akash to give money if he wants to see rani sahiba alive. Come on I have to be paid for living with your wh**e sister. But money isn't your most loved possession is it. It is khushi. Don't worry khushiji thinks that all dead people become stars. And I guess even you'll become a star to watch her. I promise you I'll make love to her under open sky so that you can watch over how I make her mine. If she isn't willing, then I shall tear her clothes, force my lips on hers and put my mark on each and every part of her body and you wont be able to do a thing about it. Her luscious lips, her incredible body will all be mine.




He laughed out. Just then Shyam felt a tap on his shoulder. Shyam turned around in shock as he knew he was caught. But he had not expected one thing. The thing that would make the very earth under his legs shake.




Standing before him was none other than Arnav Singh Raizada.




Shyam: What? B---Bu---b---but h0---how?




Arnav smirked.




Shyam took off the white cloth. There was no body there.




Shyam: how is this possible?




Arnav: Because I am Arnav Singh Raizada.




Shyam: It does not matter. Nothing has changed. You can't do anything. I can still hurt your di.




Arnav: Which di? Are you talking about the woman who helped plan my murder? Well she is not my di. She is dead to me.




Now it was Shyam's turn to get shocked.




Arnav: Yes I had overheard everything.




---------flashback--------




Shyam: Rani sahiba it is true. Your brother was the one who planned and got your child killed. He didn't want to see my son be born in this world. That's why he and khushi killed him.




Anjali: No. It cant be. Chottey can't do that.




Shyam: Don't you trust me rani sahiba? Your own husband? Do you think I will lie?




Anjali: I hate you ARNAV. HOW DARE YOU TAKE MY CHILD'S LIFE. I WILL AVENGE MY DEAD SON. I WILL KILL YOU ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA.




Shyam smirked as he had successfully gained an ally in Anjali now as he could ask Anjali to kill Arnav and then hand over Anjali to the police.




Then his path to Khushi would be clear. Truly all women were dumb, well except his khushi. He smirked at his victory and failed to see the one person who had heard it all.




NK had heard everything and had the presence of mind to take out his phone and record the whole event from the keyhole. It was a desperate attempt, which got him what he needed. He ran to Arnav to break this to him.




-------------end of flashback-------




Arnav: So I made a plan to kill you instead Shyam Manohar Jha.



Shyam: B---but you cant do that. Your sister will break down.




Arnav: She wont. As she will be told you have gone out on work. She is so unstable that she will believe anything. But I don't care about her right now. My business is with you tonight.




Arnav took out a gun with a silencer. Shyam started to back away. He tried opening the doors but they were locked from outside.




Arnav: Its no use. This plan is fool proof.




Shyam: No please don't kill me. I can change.




Arnav: I give people only one chance to change. You got more than three.




Shyam: Please, forgive me.




Shyam had fallen at arnav's feet to beg for mercy.




Shyam:Think about khushiji atleast. She woudnt want you to do this.




Arnav: Oh, believe me I am doing this for her. She will be so happy with you dead. Believe me you are doing a great social service by taking my place.




Shyam: But police will catch you Arnav.




Arnav smirked with utmost confidence as he replied,




Arnav: How will they know? You are all alone in a room with a dead man. Who else is here to watch?




Shyam: But you cant dispose my body. Someone will see it.




Arnav put his head back and laughed as fear shook shyam to his very roots.




Arnav: Well you are taking my place in the cremation chamber. We need a body and yours is perfect for the job.




Shyam: But I love khushiji. These bullets wont do anything to my true love.




Arnav: We'll see wont we.




And then he fired.


One


Two


Three


Four


Five


Six



All six bullets into Shyam's chest and he died before his face hit the ground.




Arnav moved to the door and opened it.




Arnav: NK, Akash come. We have to be quick.




NK and Akash came inside and took Shyam's body and placed it where Arnav's was a few minutes ago.




Akash: But bhai how did you fool the doctors? Did you bribe them?





Arnav: That would have been too risky. I just took a drug that effectively stops the heartbeat of certain individual for a given time. Then I asked NK to put a thermal blanket between me and the ice and I just kept my eyes closed. It took so much self control to watch people cry for me. But it was necessary. Di is too unstable to think straight. It is best I leave with khushi.




Akash: But bhai, why did bhabhi faint?




Arnav blushed slightly as his ears turned slightly red.




---------Flashback------------



Khushi choked, feeling her wind pipe constricted. She wanted to die and wake up in Arnav's arms. She prayed to her devi maiyya to kill her as well.




She had been alone next to Arnav's body covered with a white sheet.




She was alone for the last 20 minutes as everyone had left to read Arnav's will.




Suddenly she was pulled by force and before she could react someone placed his lips on hers.




She was about to shout when the familiarity of those lips stopped her in one instant. She pulled him so hard towards herself and ravished Arnav's lips.




And the very next second, Arnav felt a hard hand hit his face hard.




SLAP.



SLAP.



SLAP.



khushi: How dare you act Arnav Singh Raizada? What the hell do you think about yourself? Do you even know what i went through. I was hoping against hope that you were alive. Now that you are, i feel like killing you myself. I hate you Arnav.





Arnav: Khushi i was attacked with the intention to kill. And the person who wants to see me die is none other than my di. SHe planned everything.




And Arnav explained everything to her.



Arnav: Di was the person who planned everything that night khushi. Shyam just put the knife through me, but that was all Anjali's idea. She was the one who wanted me dead khushi.




All this was just too much for her to take and She fainted.




------------end of flashback--------




Akash: So will she do it?




Arnav: I think so.




NK: nannav mere Bhai, you escape .We'll take care of the rest.



Arnav: Thanks NK, Akash.



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Reporter: As you can see the body of Arnav Singh Raizada is being cremated as we speak. As per his will no one was allowed to look at his body and even the lone person who could is in hospital lying unconscious. That's it from our end folks. Have a good eveining.




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Khushi was now sitting inside the private Jet Akash had asked her to sit in. There was a clumsy fat man and aman inside the cabin.




Aman soon made his way to the start of the cabin.




Khushi suddenly fell asleep. She woke up when she felt lips kissing her.




She opened her eyes wide and immediately recognized that touch, That kiss.




Khushi: Arnnnaaavvv.




Arnav: Khushi.




They stared into each other's eyes and were lost in each other.




Khushi: Are we doing the right thing?




Arnav: Yes we are khushi. Anjali di would never stop trying to kill me now. and I cant put you at risks now. I love you khushi and I wont let you suffer alone. We will bounce back. Akash will take care of the rest. And they will visit us every month. So dont be depressed khushi. This was for the best.




Arnav brought his lips on hers and claimed her mouth kissing her trying to forget old memories and making new ones.




They were made for each other and they knew they belonged nowhere else.





Thus they kissed and reached their destination to start a new life together. They knew that as long as they had each other's support along with a few of Arnav's what the's and khushi's paagalpana, All would be well.



---------the end-----------


how was it? caz i seriously have no idea... am already half asleep... whoops...


hope it turned out good enuf...



chao,



Peace Out...


Evil Singh Raizada...

Edited by daredevilpreyas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😛 * i did comment * 🤣
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d startinn...😲
murdered...n dat too Arnav singh raizada...* thud *😲

Shyam manohar jhaa...* disgustin *
he is sucha a cheappooo...😡

tear n dat too from cheappoo...* soundz so wierd * 😆
role model for ASR n dat too none other den Shyam...( isse achcha hai ke koi role model he na banaye )😡

will will...argghh...😡
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eekzz...25% of shares in AR n khushijii...* kaunse dream world mein hai *
haha...shyam thinkz he is a genius...* crackz me up *🤣
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will to be announced in d presence of media...* wah wah *
poorr khushi...😭
d will...rofl...🤣 ( sareyyy sapne chur chur ho gaye...🤣 )
personal belongingz...khushi..!!😆
liquid assetz...khushi..!!😆
share accountz...Akash...!!🤣
anji ko jootii mili...haha... 🤣 🤣 🥳

shyamz face wud be a must watch if such thing happens in d show...* epic scene *
shyam khushi ke room me gaya...* disgustin *
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haha...shyam ke ASR ko stupid bulaya...n he is downryt creep to even talk about sumone elsez wife lykk dis...* eekzz *

shockkk of his lyff...* d great ASR * ( koi khushi ke barey mein itna ganda bole aur ASR na ayee...Not Possible )😆

* thud * Anji planned out d murder...😲
NK is sucha sweet guyy...😳
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hehe...shyam actin awl bechara...* pagal *😆
so finally d topic of shyam manohar jaa endz...* woppie *

so NK n Akash even helped ASR...* great brotherz *

awww...so khushi ko pehle se pata chal gaya tha ke ASR is alive...* phewww...*

so theyy go far away from everyone n start their life afresh together...* nice idea actually * 😉

amazinggg OS...* chal frustration aya toh tuney yeh OS likha na...aisa frustration bar bar hona chahiye * 😆
Edited by Chocoangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chocoangel

😛 * i did comment * 🤣


paagal hai tu chopstick...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: daredevilpreyas


paagal hai tu chopstick...


do i even need to mention dat...

Bachpan se yaarr...🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant OS. Saara Frustration, jo aaj ke episode ke vajah se aaya tha, wo chala gaya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha i so hope thiss happens!! we will have stupid anjali off our shoulders and shyam dead with just khushi and arnav living happily!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS!!
Good way to vent out your frustration!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey when I am reading Khushi's part really sentimental and I was hearing one song Saiyare from ek tha tiger and when I am reading that particular part Shreya Ghoshal part and my eyes were moist.Because of episode I can't sleep so I was just trying to pass my time and I read your TS.Its really awesome.At last snake was killed.Brilliant will.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
brilliant
mindblowing
very well written
can't believe Anjali planned to kill Arnav
but Arnav turned out to be more smarter and why wouldn't he be after all he is ASR
loved it
thanks for pm

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