New ff based on the characters of IPKKND- Ch 2 up!

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saaw

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Guys :)

I used to write a ff: "The UnFriends" in the ff forum, but stopped midway..

Ive started editing and re-polishing it again, centred around he characters of IPKKND :)

Tell me what you think of it:

http://methroughthelookingglass.wordpress.com/2012/08/05/the-unfriends-chapter-1-at-first-glance/

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Edited by saaw - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

here's chapter 1 for those who want to glance through :

Chapter 1:

"You are just so good at playing with people's feelings, aren't you?! Making people's life hell is your hobby and speciality!!! " She hugged the pillow tighter, wanting to pour out all her tears into it , as his words echoed inside her head. What had SHE done? she thought, getting angrier by the minute. Finally, not able to contain her anger at him anymore, she picked up the phone and called her closest pillar of strength and support, Payal. "She will be with me" she thought, waiting for Payal to come on the line. "What did that dog do now???" Payal's voice blasted through the phone. "I swear, I will personally chop him to pieces if he hurts you once more!! " Khushi told her all that had happened, breaking down when she came to the "Playing with feelings" part.

A long silence on the line,followed by Payal's now-subdued tone– "You know, if I had been in your life then Khushi, I would have never let you break up with him." , was the last straw. With a "Thanks, I'll call you later", she disconnected the call and sat back down on her bed, her thoughts slowly going to THAT day. The day she noticed him for the first time.

Lavanya had just walked out of the class to wash her hands, and she was waiting for her to return. This was where she belonged, she thought, turning the pages of her textbook.When suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder. Turning around, she looked at who had tapped her. "Oh! The new guy. Right. Some teacher's son, I heard. Cute guy though ", she thought, as she gave him a "What?" expression, raising her eyebrows. "Erm… Is your friends name Lavanya or Lavinia?" He asked. Ignoring the sudden flash of indignation at his question, she forced a sweet smile on her face, and said "It's Lavanya." With an "Oh thanks", he turned behind, and so did she, desperately trying to ignore the disappointing feeling that had crept in when he did not even bother to ask- "And.. what's your name then? " Laughing at her own childishness, she immersed herself in the textbook again..