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Posted: 13 years ago
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In the rain at night

Personally i felt that in IPKKND since there was a rainy night they could have shown a rain sequence.But they did'nt show it.So i created a rain scene.

Arnav did 6 months contract marriage with Khushi thinking that she was having an affair with his brother in law Shyam.When he realized how dangerous Shyam is and Khushi was innocent he kicked Shyam out of the house.Due to frustration Arnav blamed Khushi for Anjali's depressed state.Later he regreted hurting Khushi though she did not mind it.She told him that she will accept him as her husband only if she comes to his arms willingly.

Khushi was alone at home.It started raining heavily.The electricity went.She was scared of darkness.Thunder's sound scared her to death.She saw a shadow.She got frightened.

K:Who is that?Don't come near to me?

She took the flower pot to defend herself by hitting him.

But in moonlight she saw his face.It was Arnav.He was smiling at her.

She was relieved:Arnavji!It was you?

She ran into his arms.She forgot her anger and melted in him.He embraced her happily.He felt that he was on cloud nine as his beloved was in his arms.

A:You said you will accept me as your husband if you come to my arms.See,you have done that now.

Khushi realized what she has done and looked at him.

He looked deeply at her eyes:Do you accept me as your husband?

She was numb.She simply looked at him.Unexpectedly he threw flower petals on her face.She took a rose petal

and looked at him unbelievingly.He smiled.

The current came.Arnav could view his sweet heart's lovely face shining like a moon made of pure marble.He got tempted and

cupped her face in his arms:If you accept me as your husband...

Slowly she

blushed.

Suddenly they heard thunder's sound.She got scared and went into his arms.Slowly she moved away from him.She was shy.He smiled.He held her hand.

A:Let us not waste this rainy night.

He ran out holding her arms.

They both were drenched completely in rain.

They both looked at each others eyes.

A:They we are completely opposite to each other,we met to be with each other,because we are made for each other.

They became emotional.

Her pearl like tears broke in the rain.

K:kitne hi duur duur hon ham donon ke raaste
mil jaate hain jo bane ek duuje ke vaaste

Arnav and Khushi felt the heart beat.They looked at each other with surprise.

A:jaisi dil hai dhadkan hai ek duuje ke vaaste


K:jaise aankh hai darpan hai ek duuje ke vaaste


A:jaise barqa saawan hai ek duuje ke vaaste


K:ek sajani ek saajan hai ek duuje ke vaaste


ek duuje ke vaaste...

A:God makes heart for everyone.But he tears the heart into two pieces.So that the lover and the beloved search for their better half.
A:us rab ne jab dil diye
K:dil ke do tukde kiye

A:donon mein ek naam likha
K:ek radha ek shyaam likha
Arnav felt his heart beating...very strong beat...He looked at Khushi touching his bosom.

A:ab ye dil dhadakte hain
K:milte aur bichhadte hain

A:ek duuje ke vaaste...
K:ek duuje ke vaaste...


They held each other's hands and swayed to the rain music.

K:We are one Arnavji.We have same soul.

A:And our desire is also same.

She blushed.He took her in his arms and twirled around in the rain.

K:ham donon ek jaan hain

A:do dil ek armaan hain
Arnav put her down softly.Suddenly they had a fear in their mind whether they will get separated.
They looked at each other emotionally.
K:What if we get separated?
Arnav kept his finger on her lips.
K:Whenever i longed for you you have gone away from me.
A:It will not happen again as I am a new man now.A man who is not shy to admit his love.
She was relieved.Still she had fear.
K:Still...
A:We will beg your God for happiness for one another.
Her tear drops flowed down.He wiped her tears.Still her eyes were wet.

K:lekin ab is mod par

A:dekhein daaman chhod kar

K:waqt ka hai yeh faisla

A:ham tum ho jaayein juda

K:maangein khushiyon ki duwa

ek duuje ke vaaste

A:maangein khushiyon ki duwa

ek duuje ke vaaste... ('Dil To Pagal Hai').

A:Let us bury our fear and enjoy this rain Khushi.

Slowly she smiled hiding her fear.

They both continued dancing enjoying every drop of rain.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...sweet...
i love this song...full of emotion..u used it well in ur story...
and love the visuals..
fantastic...
⭐️
Edited by morning_star - 13 years ago
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so sweet...i loved it,dear😛
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Wow beautiful dear... Loved it
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res ((: Edited: Awww' that was really sweet x Waiiting to see the real rain sequence in the show x -_-' btw sweet OS
Edited by iluvarshi15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I wish it Happened like this on Friday 😳
Bdw Nice Os !!
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Nice os
thx 4 the pm:-)
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😳wowww
awesome dear
loved it😳
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Nice os
Thanks for the pm
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loved it jasmine di
u rock absolutely

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