Here it is OS Kidnapping pt2&3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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my take on what happens next! part 1 below in blue press for link

Arnav froze as Shyam's pistol touched his forehead.

'Yek kaise hua, kaise bachgaya?'

'Saley saab, hum ne kitne din se isse din ka inthizaar kya hai! Aaj hum apko khatham karenge, aur Khushiji ko bhee'

Khushi's eyes slowly started open; she was still blurry and could not see clearly. Her hearing was muffled but as she lay there all she could see was her pyar Arnav holding her in his arms. As she began to open her eyes fully she could see Shyam holding his gun to Arnav's head.

Sweat began to pour from Arnav's head. He thought how could he control Shyam but protect Khushi at the same time. There, Khushi, lay in his arms, so weak and unconscious. He could not see her face as he was focused on Shyam.

'Mai kya karoon' his mind was repeatedly saying, ' Mai kya karoon'

'Saley saab, humne sab ko dhoka diya, aapko, Khushiji ko aur Rani sahiba ko bhee,' humne sab ko barbaad kiya. Humhe aap ki jayadaad chahiye!'

Khushi's eyes opened more only to see clearly now what was happening. 'Arnavji' she shouted, Shyam cast his eyes down at Khushi; Arnav saw the opportunity and grabbed Shyam's hand which held the revolver.

'Haraam zaadey' Arnav shouted; both Arnav and Shyam, arm in arm, fought eacthother, trying to keep the gun out of eachother's way. Arnav tried to punch Shyam in the stomach, but with little effect. Shyam's grip was so tight, there was no letting go. Both their hands on the gum whilst the other hands round eachothers' necks. A shot was fired in the air as they scuffled with eachother, sweat and blood pouring from eachother faces.

Khushi lay there on the ground, trembling with fear. 'Rabba ve' ' was sounding in the background as she saw her love battle away trying to sacrifice his life and save hers.

"Humhe kuch karna hai, humhe kuch karna hai', she kept repeating.

From a distance she could see someone on a bike. It was one of the gunday coming at high speed on the bike. She was shocked.

'Arnavji' she screamed; Arnav continued his fight with Shyam trying to get a grip of the gun whilst throwing punches at Shyam and Shyam trying to beat him.

Khushi panicked, she had to do something. She stood up and saw a large rock on the side of the road. She would use this to try and hit Shyam and help her Arnavji.

Khushi made her way to the rock as far as she could but she was hurt badly. Blood was pouring down from leg due to the car crash, she could only limp. There was a gash on her back as well from the cut glass.

Arnav and Shyam continued in their scuffle. As they struggled intensely around the gun , another shot was fired. Arnav checked himself, he was ok but realised Shyam was unhurt too. The shot had missed them both.

The biker approached them, Arnav caught a glimpse of him and threw a hard punch at Shyam managing to release the gun from his hand. Shyam fell to the ground, the gun flew in the air.

'Yeyhee mauka hai, aab main nahee harunga' Arnav said to himself.

Arnav threw himself into the air to try and grab the gun. Shyam watched in despair. The biker stormed up in front of Shyam, the biker grabbed Shyam, 'Boss chaliye, Boss Chaliye abhee'

Arnav managed to grab the gun. As he got a grip and began to point it at Shyam whilst Shyam was escaping with his accomplice''.'Arnavji'- there was a scream. Arnav turned round only to find Khushi, the love of his life, his pyar, his jigar, was slowly falling to ground, her hands covering the side of her stomach covered in blood. She had been shot. 'Khushiii' he screamed. Khushi slowly fell to the ground''''''..


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Shaamy thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
Thank you Arshifan4life

I am now thinking about my next part
shall i continue?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue and add me to your PM list!
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oh wonderful!!
continue with the next part soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you to everyone who commented, i hope to continue soon






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Posted: 13 years ago
#6
it was really good, but why is everyone talking about khushi getting shot becuase i read other OS's too with khushi dying, so someone please tell whether khushi really will get shot or is it just a coincidence that everyone is making OS's like this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
OS Part 3 HERE IT IS...

Arnav's heart was pounding as he saw Khushi screaming out for help.

He could not believe his eyes'. Khushi had taken a hit. He realised now when the gun went off that bullet had hit his pyar. It was meant to hit Shyam.


Arnav screamed 'Khushi, Khushi, nahee, yeh nahee ho sak tha' He ran over to her as fast as he could, threw himself to the ground next to her, trying to hold her in his arms.

"Khushi, Khushi, aakhein kholo, aakhein kholo, please"

Khushi stared up at him struggling to keep her eyes open but barely having the strength to give him a smile. Her love Arnaviji was holding her, just as she had wanted, just as she had prayed.

Arnav held her tightly feeling her blood from the side of her body from where the bullet had penetrated. Khushi had suffered so much pain, so many injuries form the car accident itself and now all this.

'Khushi , woh goli mujhe lagney chahiye tha, siraf mujhe' Arnav said, 'Khushi, please, Khushi, aakhein kholo,' he said trying to shake her, but he could see her eyes drifting away as she was losing consciousness. He held her tightly against his chest, his hands running through her thick black hair, his lips passing over her long sparkling earings that she always wore and attracted him.

'Khushi, nahee Khushi'.

Kya karoon, main kya karoon? ' He needed to call for help, but there was no one around. He looked around, there was a sound in the distance, it sounded like a tone, a ring tone?

A phone maybe? He looked closely only to find a cell phone was lying on the ground where he had fought with Shyam.

It must be Shyam's phone. It must have fallen out of his pocket during the scuffle.

He gently placed Khushi on her side to the ground whilst quickly grabbing the phone. The battery power was low, the signal was weak, this was why the phone was beeping.

Arnav realised he had to make this call, he needed to get through to the hospital to call for an ambulance. He dialled the number, his hand shaking, and covered with blood.

'Hello, hello, main Arnav Singh Raizada bholrahaa hoon, hello, mujhe abhee ambulance ki zaroorat hai. Meri patni ko goli lagee hai' Arnav managed to get the details across to the caller on the phone. He could only hope someone would arrive in time. The phone cut out, the battery had died.


What would happen if he lost Khushi? He couldn't go on'.

He realised how much he loved her. He realised for the first time he called her his 'patni' and he was about to lose her.

He held her tightly, trying to feel her pulse. It was weak, and fading away''.

Edited by Shaamy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome!! pls pls continue!! can't wait to read more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very intense please do continue and pm when next update is ready
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow that was amazing...She is unconscious shot ... hope she is well now.

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