OS- I Dub Thee Unforgiven

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

a lovely piece of writing that brought out arnav's painful past and his drive to succeed

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irene

@rennie

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

great start...loved the pps more...

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I loved this, brilliant, and a totally new concept.

Take care :)

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I love your author's note! It was extremely witty and fun to read!

Now coming to the OS. Wow. I mean it. Like serious Wow. No extra fanfare,no drama but an exceptionally well written OS on ASR.

Straightforward, no added emotions and crisp. I loved it from the title to the last letter.

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smiley13

@smiley13

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

In one word if u ask...awesome...i loved it...it's just arnav...his life,his feelings...waow...amazing...i don't know whether u r going to continue it...but if u continue it...it would be really grt reading this story...

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@lexaxel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

U write really well!!!! This OS has great potential...wont u consider making it an FF????

I mean, write it the way u think the story shd have gone...the characters remain the same, the basic storyline the same...but twist the story the way u think it shd have gone...seriously u shd pay me for this idea😛.

Edited to ask: U have an index????

Edited by lexaxel - 13 years ago

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Ishita131

@Ishita131

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Great work. I know the title says OS but some people really write humungous SS/FF even the the title says OS. So if you are one of them and planning to continue pls PM me. Oh and do PM for any other work of yours too. I really like the way you write. :)
<3

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: lexaxel
U write really well!!!! This OS has great potential...wont u consider making it an FF????

I mean, write it the way u think the story shd have gone...the characters remain the same, the basic storyline the same...but twist the story the way u think it shd have gone...seriously u shd pay me for this idea😛.

Edited to ask: U have an index????

@Bold Check out the Pg1 again. Updated it 😊

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

well not surprised that though he has everything he still isnt happy and although she had nothing yet she tried to make everyone else happy
that is the difference between KKG & ASR and perhaps why they ended up together because both could do something for the other

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Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Brilliantly written !
Loved it !

Manal

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