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Posted: 13 years ago
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So this is a glimpse of the future OS I'll be uploading!! I'm still not sure if I should - not just because of some of the exceptionally talented writers, but because I'm not sure if I'll have the time!!

So, until then I would like to see the reaction to this small piece I have!!

I'm still trying to get used to how IF works so, if I ask any stupid irrelevant questions in the future - forgive me. 😉

One Interesting fact: I have been watching IPKKND since September but didn't get an account until recently. So...her goes nothing. oh, and this is kind of based on the track that's been happening now so..meh. 😕

THE EXTRACT...

Shyam: Yeh deal nahin ta! Tumnhe kahan ta, ke jab tumnhe will ki kagas mil jayenga toh tum Saale Saab ko chor dego.

Arnav's uncle: Ab mujhe koi farak nahin parta!! Aur yeh sabit karne ke liye mein abhi ke abhi yeh gholi maar doonga.

Khushi looked at the gun in horror. Shyam and arnav's uncle fought over the gun rigorously.

Khushi: Arnav ji!!! Haat ye!! Aap ko gholi lag jai gi!!

Arnav couldn't move, he was too weak. He looked up to Khushi helplessly - in desperation. Khushi ran as fast as she could.

He grabbed on to the chair he was tied to and attempted to get up. His legs wobbled in the process until he was up, still clutching on to the chair for dear life.

Khushi: ARNAV JI!! She shouted with all her might.

She finally got there. All that filled the silence was the eerie wind. She held his face in her small fragile hands that were shaking. Despite her tears flowing down she smiled. So did he. They were very grateful for this moment, no one could separate them.

Khushi: Arnav Ji' She whispered.

He pulled her into a tight hug, one hand on her hair and the other on her waist, never wanting to let go. His nose was buried in her hair whilst she comfortably laid her head on his chest, silently sobbing.

Until, the silence was broken, by the triggering of a gun. It felt as if being kicked, or a hard punch until the hot sulphuric burn took over ' an agonizing pain, followed by severe numbness.

Arnav waited for the effect of the gun to finally begin, but it never did. He slowly pulled back from the embrace and stared down, his mind working very slowly. No blood? That was until he looked at Khushi, whose eyes were slowly closing. He looked down to her waist to find a patch of red blood oozing out from the side staining the beautiful sari. His eyes bulged in horror.

Arnav: Khushi? He was barely audible.

Khushi slowly leaned into Arnav. Realizing he couldn't hold any longer he held her tightly as they both fell down in an embrace together once again.

He felt no pain as his body made contact with the ground, no pain compared to what he was feeling inside. He positioned Khushi's head in his lap, frantically drying her tears and moving her hair from her face holding on to her hand rubbing away trying to give warmth.

Arnav: Khushi stay with me. Please. Can you hear me?

She whimpered. His pain intensified. She attempted open her eyes and raise her hand to his face. He helped her and held it there.

Khushi: Ab toh aapko yaakin hain ke hum saach bol re te, hai na?

Arnav was lost for words, and with that she slowly drifted.


OK! So, leave comments below buddy me if you want PMs!! Ummm, what else?? Oh yeah, sorry for the hindi, it's not my mother tongue but I have tried my best...

Until next time...Maybe.

MissElektra101 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg..u have to continue ...and fast...

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