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Posted: 13 years ago
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Bonswar! Let me inform you this is horribly short, but I had to type it up!

Read it and tell me what you think

Murderer

He had killed her.


Arnav Singh Raizada had ended something so beautiful, so magnificent, so alluring and natural with his words, with his hands and with his eyes.


He saw how every day would be a new day for both of them, it was almost as if god would be hinting to him that here is chance, go redeem yourself. But Arnav being Arnav refused, he thought there was a catch, a loophole in the story but there wasn't.


What was, was her.


He saw how everyday he would find something new to taunt her with, he would criticize her cooking, he would call her a cunning woman he would tell her to tidy their room and yet she would just stand there, her face a cool mask of indifference, her hair swept up in a braid but her eyes were the only things he could still connect with.


But now as he shot at her with all the bullets he had her eyes became lifeless it was if a part of her began to die, the light in those eyes began to dim slightly, and now as he looked all he could see was the darkness.


That darkness.


It was the same darkness he had executed himself to when his mother had passed away. He could still hear the deafening screams off his late mother, the penetrating gunfire of his father and the wails of his beloved sister.


He could hear it all.


He wished she would respond somehow, tell him that all these accusations were not real, defend herself in someway but she never did, she stood there.


And today he could see it all, he could see the damage he had done to her, he could see him destroying her, he could see himself as a murderer.


Arnav Singh Raizada was a murderer.


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^^ do check it out if you want to read anything else by me 😃😆

Yes I am aware that this is horribly short but it was an idea that I need to scribble down and I have. I'm sorry for its length but I had to write it or my brain would have turned to jelly.

Do tell me what you think.

-Aashifa

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it! That was short, but your message was powerful!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Can't wait for the next part
Update soon
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Short but powerful and to the point. Great job.
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That was great start ,waiting to read more .👍🏼so update as soon as possible.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was too short but wonderful. Continue, i want more.pllzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very sad os. beautifully written even though its short
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aww though it was short
but wonderful display of emotions be arnav
loved it

PS all the best for ur studies👍🏼
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Awesome Start..Cant wait to read Further..Keep it Going
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Loved it! That was so sad but powerful!

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