Arhi:OS- Road to Redemption Part 2 pg8

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LoLo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Excellent story. First part was so deep and dark and then this one was so much fun, but not silly.

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

So sweet and funny!

Rofl! He thinks like a man... And she is chucking a shoe at him...

I loved her reaction to finding it they were still married! Raakshas and laad governor! Heheheheheh!

Even though I am eagerly awaiting your other one...I still want you to write this one too... What can I say..😳 I know I am being greedy!

Thank you for the PM!

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

🤣 oh that had me in splits... the minute khushi learns that she is still married she turns into this lioness!!!

n arnav simply had the best replies "are u coming back to bed" 😳 🤣

that was great... would love to read what all Mr. Raizada has to end up doing in order to court his wife!!

thnx for the pm!

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Yes, yes yes!! You continued!!! WOOO! :D

That was such a cute sequel to the first part! I was grinning throughout the entire part, these lines in particular literally made me laugh:

"Khushi please don't tell me you're thinking about Bua-ji when I have you pinned below me..."

"Technically, we're... still... Married."

"WHAT?" Her moth shot open and her eyes-brows went right up to her hairline.

"You know...you.. have to sign divorce papers for a marriage to end.. which you didn't... I mean I didn't give you one to sign...because I was too possessive.. so..hmm" He muttered not looking into her eyes.

"So you are you coming back to bed now?"

Hahahahahha awesome work! :D

I am a sucker for happy endings, and this was such a cute part, with a perfect mix of romance, humour and flirtatious behaviour. Loved reading it!

...any chance of you making it into an SS...or FF? :D :D :D

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago

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Sharmila

@ongongong

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

So nice,do PM me when you update the next chapter!

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arshi10arshi

@arshi10arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

love the way u write

do pm me wen u update

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Manisha Reddy.D

@Manisha_PJB

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

THis is a lovely post

Please update the next part soon😊

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

cute update...wud love to see arnav wooing khushi...

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TeleFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Ha ha he is impossible to be angry at lol. So he has to woo her now? Looking forward to aee this. Nice nice likex it lots

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

no chucking.ony continuing.samjhi tum?😆

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