Arhi:OS- Road to Redemption Part 2 pg8 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Excellent story. First part was so deep and dark and then this one was so much fun, but not silly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
So sweet and funny!
Rofl! He thinks like a man... And she is chucking a shoe at him...

I loved her reaction to finding it they were still married! Raakshas and laad governor! Heheheheheh!

Even though I am eagerly awaiting your other one...I still want you to write this one too... What can I say..😳 I know I am being greedy!
Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
🤣 oh that had me in splits... the minute khushi learns that she is still married she turns into this lioness!!!

n arnav simply had the best replies "are u coming back to bed" 😳 🤣


that was great... would love to read what all Mr. Raizada has to end up doing in order to court his wife!!

thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Yes, yes yes!! You continued!!! WOOO! :D

That was such a cute sequel to the first part! I was grinning throughout the entire part, these lines in particular literally made me laugh:

"Khushi please don't tell me you're thinking about Bua-ji when I have you pinned below me..."

"Technically, we're... still... Married."

"WHAT?" Her moth shot open and her eyes-brows went right up to her hairline.

"You know...you.. have to sign divorce papers for a marriage to end.. which you didn't... I mean I didn't give you one to sign...because I was too possessive.. so..hmm" He muttered not looking into her eyes.


"So you are you coming back to bed now?"

Hahahahahha awesome work! :D
I am a sucker for happy endings, and this was such a cute part, with a perfect mix of romance, humour and flirtatious behaviour. Loved reading it!

...any chance of you making it into an SS...or FF? :D :D :D






Edited by Krani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
So nice,do PM me when you update the next chapter!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
love the way u write
do pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
THis is a lovely post
Please update the next part soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
cute update...wud love to see arnav wooing khushi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Ha ha he is impossible to be angry at lol. So he has to woo her now? Looking forward to aee this. Nice nice likex it lots
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no chucking.ony continuing.samjhi tum?😆

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