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Posted: 13 years ago
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Author's note: "I condemn indirect bashing in the name of constructive critisism, if u really feel like being constructive... pm me, i wont eat u"
Ok guys after my FF Rakshas here is an OS'based on my random thought 'hehehe ..the brown bracketed part for those who cant understand hindi or urdu...so ppl who do understand..no need to read tht part. 😊

Khushi get into her room after another pathetic encounter with Shayam'she was making jaleebies in the kitchen after arnav have scolded her for disappearing without telling him ,when shyam entered the kitchen ..and had a bite of one of the jaleebie she was holding in her hands ,lost totally in Arnav's words. She suddenly turned around and saw him standing so close to her'she was already in raged so she insulted him badly, warned him and ran to her room and locked the room behind her 'breathing hard and angry'

Wht the hell'why have I married this man if I were supposed to face these kind of creeps all alone? Why is he with me then???? Why he wanted to be called my husband if he cant protect me from this world'and what will I do after he will leave me? I can go no where and I'I'I think'I can't live without him either'no matter he love me or not but I love him and I cant fake it to hate him'like he is faking to love me though he never ever loved me''but I did'ever time he acts like he love me like hell off course to show any of his family members'I feel so satisfied though I know he is faking '.but then why I can't see any lie in his eyes'his eyes speaks to me'speaking some thing I always wanted to hear from him'tht I love u'but soon when the family member disappear I feel his eyes becoming hard as stone'why is he hurting me by showering these extreme emotions on me? Cant he know they are difficult for a human to take'specially a girl. Why he hurts me by treating like a dumy..? tht he can have me when ever he wants ,play and then throw me when he is need is satisfied? Why? Why is he doing this? Why he is being so inhuman towards me? I hate him 'I hate him more than he hate me 'I don't love him any more '' She saw his files placed on the table near pool and she smack them on the floor in anger'

He entered the room out of the bathroom and saw his files on the floor'realizing tht khushi might have done this he rushed towards her and turned her to face him by pulling her arm roughly'

Ahh'. She looked at him in pain first and then rage running over her.

Khushi Who do u think u r to throw my files on floor hunn'he said angrily shouting'

Kia pocha ap nay???? Hum kon hain???? Han? hum kon hain??? Pushing him off her 'apki himat bhi kaisy ho sakti hy humsay yeh pochnay ki humari zindagi kharab kr k?ap hotay kon hain pochnay waly k hum kon hain??? Pushing him one more time, leaving him stunned to see her like tht'.NAHI MR.ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA 'ap yeh haq kho chukay hain '.ap humsay yeh nahi poch saktay hain k hum kon hain, aur ajj hum ap sy pochain gy k ap kon hain?..batye humahin AP KON HAIN??jab k ap k hotay huay bhi humain shyam ji jaisy ghatiya insan ko akelay bardasht karna pary, AP KON HAIN jab humain shayam ji jaisay ghatiya insan sy roz dhamki khani pary k wo hamari zindagi barbad kr dain gy,,,AP KON HAIN jab wo apnay ganday hathon sy humain chonay ki koshish karein aur hum kuch na kar sakain khud ko bachanay k liye? AP KON HAIN agar apkay hotay huay log hum py ilzam lagain aur hum kisi ko koi safai na dy sakain ?AP KON HAIN jab apki waja sy humary saray rishtay hum sy rooth jain??AP KON HAIN jab apkay rehtay hum apnay apko dunia me itna akela mehsoor karein''aur app apnay apko humaray patti kehtay hain? KAISAY???

(Wht did u asked ? who am I??hunn? who am I?...pushing him off her...How dare u asked me this after ruining my life??..pushing him one more time while he was stunned to see this side of hers'.Who r u to ask me tht who am I??? NO MR.ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA..u have lost this right now I will ask u tht who r u???tell me who r u? when even after being ur wife I have to face tht creep shayam all alone? WHO R U when em daily being threatened by tht creep all alone? WHO R U when I feel helpless when he tries to touch me with his dirty hands? WHO R U when ppl blame me in ur presence and u never do any thing?WHO R U when all my dear ones left me becoz of u? WHO R U when I feel so alone even after being with u? and u call urself my husband??? HOWW???)

He was stunned to hear wht she was saying'.he realized she was not lying and he remember her eyes when that day shayam have hugged her'she was scared and he was realizing it now'.when he pushed him one more time making him angry as he held her arms and shouted KHUSHIII'! But she was so much angry tht she forgot whom she was talking to '.

She continued in his grip on her upper arms '.kabhi socha hy apnay ap humain kitni takleef detay hain? Kabhi socha hy apnay k jis insan sy kabhi hum ny pyaar kia tha uska yeh roop dekh k humain kaisa lagta hoga ???(have u ever thought how much u hurt me? Have u ever thought how will I feel to find this side of a person I ever loved?)

...leaving arnav stunned to realize tht she always Loved Him not shayam 'not matter she was angry this time but she was his and he felt a ton of relief in his heart after so many days''..

kabhi socha hy apnay k jab ap humain 6 mahenay bad chor dain gy tou hum kaisay jee payein gy apkay bina??? (have u ever thought tht when u'll leave me after 6 months then how will I live without u?)She tried to push him one more time but couldn't move him much from his place as he was holding her tight'. NAHI'HUM AB YAHAN REH K YEH TAKLEEF AUR NAHI SEHNA CHAHTAY 'HUM ABHI ISSI WAKT YEH SHADI TOR K JA RAHAY HAIN'(NO I AM NOT GONA TOLERATE THIS TORTOURE ANY MORE'I AM LEAVING THIS PLACE RIGHT NOW BY BREAKING THIS MARRIAGE)

..she tries to move out of his hands by pushing him and moving towards the door but he stoped her mid way by standing on the door before her'

Tum aisay nahi ja sakti Khushi'tum meri patni ho..aur mera tumhain janay sy roknay ka'tum kahin nahi jao gi'na abhi na kabhi'SAMJHI TUM?''(No u cant leave this place without my permission, u r my wife and I have a right to stop u, U R NOT GOING ANY WHERE'NOW OR EVER 'DO U UNDERSTAND?)

he yanked her back and she collided with his hard chest and started struggling not looking in his eyes as he held her closer , she was running her hands and feet in his grip and punching him with her tiny hands in his chest , she was very angry '.. he tired to calm her 'Khushi'KHUSHII'but today she was not listening him'..Choriye humain'Choriyeee'Choriye (LEAVE ME ALONE ..LEAVE MEEE'LEAVE MEEE)

..she punched his chest fastlyy screaming in anger '.and struggled like this with him for good 3 minutes'..Arnav now knew she is not gona listen so he put his arms around her all over her upper body and hugged her tightly so she could'nt move her body part'he hugged her so tightly tht she felt her ribcage will break.

Ahhh Ar..navvv jiii'choriye'(Ahhh' Ar..nav jiii leave me ')

she was screaming loud in pain and anger but he was not in the mood to let her go ..she continued her struggle to get out of his strong arms but he was too much for her'.at last when she felt tired and could not struggle more she stop struggling and breathed heavily as she was tired'then she started crying like a child loud'he kissed under her ear to calm her as she was sobbing non stop'he put a little more pressure on her almost crushing her to his chest'as he make love to her 'she was not responding him and was crying only...he carsses her back with his hands as as he felt her sobbing hard against his chest. He left her 'picked her up in his arms and moved toward his bed'placing her on the bed and covering her with comforter as she closed her eyes sobbing and soon fall asleep like tht'He stood there watching her innocent face and pink puffy eyes as she closed her eyes'.

Arnav felt she was very tired 'very tired of struggling'very tired of facing every one's hatred, very tired of facing a creep, very tired of her life, very tired of being alone'BUT NO MORE NOW'.he stood in the French door of his room which opened to the pool side where khushi used to slept and he stood there watching her all night after she slept. But today she was not here'he looked at the sky and remembered how it was cloudy in the morning and he was worried all day tht how would he get her in if it rained but now the clouds were gone and the sky was clean enough 'just like his life now.

PS: Ok so this is all.. sweety pies ..now flood the thread with ur cute comments and sweet likes😃 and also do tell me if u dont like it one bit even...i am ready to get all kind of resposes..
Link For the list of my other work (My other work may not show this softer side of Arnav wholly like in this one, i prefer charachterizing him dark as ASR, so read at ur own choice)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_rockstar

yyaayyayy mee first!!!


OMG how cute!!!
started off so simply but progressed so awesomely!!!
i must say u get ur readers hooked like ur FF!!!( my hint is----plz update..im dying in here!!hehhe)
wow to stop khushi he hugged her...what an idea sirji!!

great OS!!thanks for sharing!!!hehehe i got ur pm after reading and commenting...!!

awww thts so cute of u yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww, how Cuteee, fantastic👏
Loved it yar, keep it up👍🏼
BTW thanx 4 pm😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice! Cute OS! Do continue expanding on this!! And make Arnav punch the snake! real hard! Do PM of you update please!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 what great update i love it so much woow absolutly woow thank you for this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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new FF will comment ...later.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AHHH! omgeee that was amazing! I hope that happens soon... I am kinda getting tired of this rubbish... Please PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice
i loved it ...

finally he realized she loves him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great update atleast kushi came out with all her furstrations
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS...Khushi proved herself she was innocent...with her rantings on ASR...it is natural...as she is fed up with everyone...and Shyam behaviour with her...is the last straw...so she went to her punching bag...i mean ASR...and wented out all her anger...

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