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Orion_N

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

interesting take... i think if this was the situation Arnav would have done exactly this!!!

Thanks for the PM

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minahil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nice update 👏 .. thanx alot for pm😛 update sooon 😳

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natashaa46

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

it was gud

going true along wid the essence of their characters

khushi acts according to her heart (she belives his promise) 😭

ASR acts as per his brains

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Typical ASR-Khushi conversation. You held the essence of the current track very well in your OS. But it was so short.!!

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Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Nice OS! But it was short! I wanna read more so I request you please write a second chapter this is really good!

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.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

loved it..though it was tiny winey..but liked it so much

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

must continue n i want Khushi to blackmail Arnie baby

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hahahaha am I evil for laughing a tad during the OS?

I like the fact that you stuck to the present situation and the characters.

I do feel sorry for Khushi, however Arnav did definitely find a way out of that.

Now if only he would use the same brains and find out the truth! I think Khushi might have more brains in the matter, as she has managed to connect the dots and find the truth before him!

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Krani
Hahahaha am I evil for laughing a tad during the OS?
I like the fact that you stuck to the present situation and the characters.

I do feel sorry for Khushi, however Arnav did definitely find a way out of that.

Now if only he would use the same brains and find out the truth! I think Khushi might have more brains in the matter, as she has managed to connect the dots and find the truth before him!

No you are not evil...b/c even I was laughing when I was writing this...actually there is some evil humor about this OS!!!😆
I wrote this OS before yesterday's episode...but I still think that the promo scene is yet to come!!!
BTW thank u so much for ur appreciation!!!

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

@ Hunnybunny3,
honeypriya,
dumas,
mali,
meemithai,
tinsel,
pri12,
loveArnavnUday,
-Chinnu-,
Smiley1279,
kajal620,
Orion_N,
tina_1234,
flowers4u,
khangirl_16,
Lily2011,
natashaa46,
pgm7,
Electric_BuBBle,
sarach,
bhaktiii,
soapfreak13

Thank you so much guys!!!!
I really appreciate ur comments!!!🤗😊
For all those people who have asked me to continue...I might add another by tomorrow...as many people didn't like the ending...so just to give it a happy ending I will add another part!!!

P.S. All the people who are blaming Arnav, should know that even in tricking Khushi, he never lied to her or promised her a fake promise. He said that he will tell the whole family the truth but he really did not say when and she also never asked, so that's where he took advantage of the situation.

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