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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

OMFG wht an update!! Im seriously in love with this SS!! This soo damn good!!

The hesitation and the passion were both very clear in this update and was AWESOME!!

The ending.. haii.. I seriously think I fainted after reading tht very last paragraph and it kinda reminded me 'California King Bed' by Rihanna...

LOVE the way you write!!

Plzzz continue soon!!!

Edited by littlemoi - 13 years ago

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Sarah

@Desi-

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

oh my gosh!!!!!!!! YOU MUST KEEP GOING! I CANNOT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

that was a fab update but you kept us hanging on a wrong point... so want them to kisss badly...

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Thanks for the PM. Great update.

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td_dhoom

@td_dhoom

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Totally Amazing and very Beautiful,Wonderfully Written...👏.

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

amazing update 😍

enjoyed it to da core! you have beautifully described everything in detail

loved it loved it

update soon 🤗

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

awesome update love it very very cute love how he was looking at her when she change and came out poor guy could not keep his hand to him self poor arnav finally realizes he is in love so sweet thanks for the pm