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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS - Come to me my love!

"Tere saare dukh mere aur mere saare sukh tere"

Khushi runs to her knight and shining armor without even thinking twice. All she sees and feels is her pillar of strength standing right in front her...

She pours her heart out to the only person she feels who understands her pain...that night she shared her sorrows with him...telling him how her parents have converted into stars, how she is scared of fast cars and how she fears darkness...and cant sleep alone in the night...now she knows why...

Why would she share her deepest secrets to a man who only gave her pain from the moment they laid eyes on each other...A man who always reminded her of her status every step of the way...who always screamed and yelled at her, twisted her wrist...

Khushi is completely shattered and heart broken...after hearing about her Babuji's paralysis... everyone thinks she is strong and she can take of everything and anything...she not able to bear this...her heart is beating really fast and pounding...She steps out to breathe...and think clearly...

Khushi: "Devi Maiyya, shakti dena, shakti dena Devi Maiyya"

And what does Devi Maiyya do...she sends a breeze of air...Khushi wonders what kind of a feeling is this...Why do I feel him at moment...I don't want to think of him...No this cant be...She looks up and it's him...

Her conscience says, not to look at him but she still does...and keeps looking and cant believe its him...

Arnav: "Khushi"...soft and tender...as if he is calling her. He is calling her "Khushi", but all she can hear is "Come to me my love".

Khushi gets up and starts walking towards him... "No, it cant be...he will hurt me again and I cant take it this time, I am shattered...but all she flashes back is to the day she shared her deepest secrets with him, how he fought for her... and beat the goons black and blue..., how he took care of her when she was unwell...

She paced up her walk running into his arms like an angel ' to her knight and shining armor...and embraced him without even giving a single thought...all she sees is that Devi Maiyya has sent her strength to her and she heard was "Come to me my love" "Come to me my love, don't cry".

As they hug, there is no more anger , no torment and no hurt in the arms of each other, their passionate flames burn and their chest collide, uniting the two hearts and the souls that were yearning to unite...and meant to be one...two hearts and souls have finally come together forever in love...destined to pair up as a couple for the rest of their life and Devi Maiyya knows...one day will come when they become husband and wife...

She hugs him and pours her heart out...and tells him that she cant do this anymore...she doesn't have the strength, she has lost her father once and cant lose him yet again... "Hum bilkul toot chuke hai"

Unable to see her tears he closes his eyes, unable to hear her tears speaking to him...he lifts his arms to embrace her so that he can take away all her pain...but what's happening... "What am I doing" , he closes his fist '. "Why am I doing this?" his mind says, "No , I can't", but his heart and soul says, "Yes, I want to"'...and all I want to is take you into my arms and say '..

"Aaao meri Jaan -Tere saare dukh mere aur mere saare sukh tere"


I made my promise - My OS after my FF. That hug was just too touching and Sanaya and Barun just rocked...they are too good as actors...Its one thing to just act , but to get inside the skin of your audience with your acting skills is just Kudos! And thats exactly what they have done.

Hope you liked it...dont forget to hit the like button or even better just comment good or bad! 😛





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shybabe thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww thanks dear...and ur the first...love you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shy You Should Write More On This. But It's Up To You.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! such brill writing. thanks for sharing

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zbegum

wow! such brill writing. thanks for sharing


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thanks my dear! -my loyal readers...love you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Shy!! You're getting awesome by each and every post!! I'm getting addicted to your wiritting mostly because of no negativity!!🤗

BTW with this OS.. It is well said.. Especially Arnav's feeling towards Kushi.. His heart and Minds fight so beautifully said.. I loved it..👏

Thanks for the PM dear!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sivaranjani

Shy!! You're getting awesome by each and every post!! I'm getting addicted to your wiritting mostly because of no negativity!!🤗

BTW with this OS.. It is well said.. Especially Arnav's feeling towards Kushi.. His heart and Minds fight so beautifully said.. I loved it..👏

Thanks for the PM dear!!😛


AAHHH! I Was waiting for you...i knew u would comment...thanks darling...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved ur OS!!!
beautiful!!!!
n barun sanaya were fab today!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Majestic piece,👏 written beautifully and carefully🤗,Thank you😃

Never think that you are alone,
for to you the angels have been shown,
your light of goodness lights up the sky,
sits so beautiful and bright the angels cry,
can you not see and feel the love around,
its always there in leaps and in bounds,
its in the beauty of your words and hands,
you reach out with love to touch everyone,
do not ever despair for the angels are there,
they watch over you daily with loving care,
they feel your deep sadness when you cry,
they feel the hurt and pain inside and sigh,
do you not see that they are there,
they watch over you with gentle care,
they love the beauty and care you show,
and they love you too don\'t you know,
please just look deeply inside of your heart,
for the angels were with you from the start.
they are always here to guide and protect you,
when you are sad they too feel the color of blue,
so never think you are in this journey alone,
for onto you a bright light of love was shown,
they are with you always both day and night,
they love you and forever will be your guiding light.
Edited by tinsel - 13 years ago
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It was beautiful!!... Arnav in his mind calls Khushi his 'Jaan'!!😍

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