OS-- saree,MOONLIGHT & DRIZZLE part 1 pg 2

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this is my first attempt ...after resding so many ffs and os i decided to write one ..hope u people like it.. im writing the prolouge... and will continue if i get only lots of comments so pls comment of like if ur a silent member of the forum...


after 2 long months she felt she could feel herself... the bubbly khushi who never let others know the agony hidden behind her smiles... her dad had talked to her today...he was getting better...these 2 months...if it wasnt for anjali di, and nani...she would have been completely broken down...she felt sad for anjali...that creep...how could he??
she felt thankful to her DEVI MAYYAI for bringing arnav into her life... but he closed the doors of his heart for her...did he also belive that she did this for money???...but she didnt know why couldnt hate him despite his harsh words...
it was 2 months after their marriage...they stayed in same room as they did not exist for each other...or that is how she felt she was trying to act.. she didnt know abt arnav... some times she sees love in her eyes...then a flash of anger... she was happy anjali and nani did not question them so much...shesaid to anjali tht she she would require some time to adjust with arnav...anjali was so happy that arnav was maaried that to khushi so she didnt compel on anything...khushi along with payal who married akash, started embriodery saree...it was atime pass and it was a small business...but she found it as a reason to be less around arnav...working on embroidery...


""maam""...

KUSHI: huh ....
we have reached house.
.oh ..
she entered the house...after sharing the details of her babuji with anjali and nani she informed that payal would be late ...she said she had to finish some orders that was due today so she had to come back fast...

she enter their desining cum stiching room... she packed all the sarees...checking each one of them...ok... mami didnt do anything...she rechecked them once more...and send them to the respective coustmers,,through the driver...

it was then that baby pink saree caugt her eyes...oh...she finished working on it 2 days back but forgot to give it to anjali...it was anjali who gave her the material for embroidery...

she knocked the door of anjali's room...
"di ...ur saree""
"khushi ...it's so beautiful...i loved the way u used the siver thread and sequence on it..."
will u wear it for me??

""kya...""
"par woh tu hum thumarae liye..."
"" i bought it for u ...but i knew u wouldnt touch it unless i told it was for me... now go and wear it...""
she handed me the blouse...oh...it was all planned ...

now there was no bargaining with her...hmm..

anjali pov of view:
now let me see what happenes to chotey when he sees khushi in saree... dunno whats this saree thing came from...
doesnt like her wearing saree...?? what a stupid thought... i tink khusi luks lovely in saree... i only agreed for this cos he got married finally...didnt want him to cos any prom on apiece of cloth...did he thing i and nani would allow him to follow his conditon life long...


"di"
she tunred to see a gorgeous khushi in the saree...with her hair opened... and mangalsutra and sindoor
oh khushi u look beautiful... merra nazar na lagne de....

KHUSHI: OH...let me check the mirror so i will know the truth...i might run off seeing me hehe
anjali" no wait..."
khushi:.huh...
anjali: u should check ur reflection in the pool not mirror..."
khushi: kya...di ap koyi film dekraha tha...itne filmy khab hogya..."
anjali pouted her lips...
khushi: okkk...now wat ?
anjali tied a silk cloth on kuhushi's eyes
why is this for?
i told u surprise ok no more questi
ons ok walk ok....

precap:

she shivered from the cold wind wind blowing...but she also sensed arnav...her heart knew he was near her...and her hear heart was not wrong...but her brain told her off...

arnav felt her... near poolside?? she would be in her designing room at this time...the cold wind from his window made him feel her presence... he walked to close the window...

the moonlight reflecting from the pool and she was there as an angle...his heart skipped a beat...





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someting in akash's behavior today felt odd ...maybe he was happy coz payal was happy that her dad was well...
MY thoughts drifted to khushi...she must be happy today...maybe today the house would be filled with her khushi...
the thoughts of our wedding night flashed through my mind...she was shell shocked...when she knew that creep was my
jeeju...where she needed support from me i stabbed her...my past...made me do that...i didnt want our past repeating on my sister...my past bought back all my anger back...i shouted at her telling that she wooed my brother in law for money since she could not trap me... my heart told me she was innocent but i had too much of experience from my past to believe my heart... she told me if i hadnt put the footage in the tv...she would have not been in this condition... i wish she had shouted that on me...but she was too shocked...next thing i knew she was crying hard telling that she wanted to go home...i shouted at her that this was her home now...wasn't that she wanted now why all the drama... i could have shouted more but she fainted the doc told that she had a shock...my poor di who didnt know what had happened ,stood with khushi...supported her... at times i feel if it wasnt for di and nani khushi would have broken down completely...di stood with her not knowing it was her husband shyam whom she adored, loved considered like god.was responsible for khushi's condition...khushi was a changed person after that incident...she lost her bubbliness...her smile some how did not reach her eyes...she talked less...at times i felt like she was robot doing her jobs as a bahu...it was di's and nani's idea to start a stitching center for her...she found it a reason to stay away from my stabs...i decided not hurt her more coz my actions could lead to di knowing the truth...
only time i saw her was at the dining table and in our bedroom when she came to sleep in her fold able mattress...

i reached home... i took the files from the seat...the calender feel from it...it was her photo in saree...i stared it i

felt my heart missing some beats...KHUSHI wearing saree could do many things to me...first my heart would take

over...which i would not allow...that's why i made her wear slawar though nani and di was not happy with this idea...
di didnt want me to do something rash for a piece of cloth... huh a piece of cloth...but when khushi draped it...i

snapped out of my thoughts and pushed the the photo in the dash board and slammed it...

ok wait here khushi...

di we have reched the pool so cant i open my eyes...will u remove this cloth...

no not now wait here i have someting else...

wasnt di getting a bit filmy...but i didnt know why i was enjoying it today...

i will come now and dont move an inch until i remove the cloth from ur eyes...

i entered the house...i felt a change in atmosphere a breeze of happiness...???...met di on the way to my room...she

asked me how was the day and told me abt khushi's dad health...oh... di was also happier than usual ...i was happy seeing di happy...i got into my room and changed into my green tee ,it was then i felt a cold wind blow into my room...it was not
the cold wind that stopped me in my tracks, i sensed her presence... but she was supposed to be in the designing room at this time... i went near french window to close it...was is khushi near the poolside??

i shivered from the cold wind wind blowing, where was di ?? suddenley my heart skipped a beat.i could sense arnav...my heart knew he was near me..and my heart was not wrong...but my brain told me off...

the moon light was reflecting from the pool ,khushi was draped in saree,,,,,,she looked gorgeous and sexy...i was pulled towards her like a magnet...but someting caught my eyes her eyes was covered... i went near her and removed the cloth...

so whst's the surprise di...? she turned and looked stragit at my face...i was transfixed by her beauty...in the moon light... i feelt my heart skip a beat...

i felt the cloth being removed from my eyes...i turned to see arnav looking at me...he looked handsome in the moonlight like a greek god...but i was mesmerised by his eyes which reflectled love in it today...i felt the monment freezed there...
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