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Posted: 13 years ago

aww thats really nice!!![🤗
loved the OS!! ypou totally rock!!!😳
big hugs🤗

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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Z!!
man you are writing amazing OS these days...cool!
I love the title, so lively!
and this scene my friend will be treat to watch!
Huh! the manager thought of calling bodyguard who himself was playing...loved it!!
Continue soon sweets and thanks for the pm!

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Begum

that is fabulous imagery...

i loved it!

is there no more to this story?

why did he let her go without shouting at her...i was almost expecting it.

who is krish..

why are they in this farm?

how does krish know dino and arnav?

ok..come on now answer in form of continuation ok

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

A very lovely Oneshot, It was truly beautiful, nice narration, i could imagine it all.

A different outlook on ArHi, and i loved imagining the scenario, it was so pleasant - light - Just beautiful! I don't have words really L0L nyways Do write more 😳

Thanks for the PM 🤗

Luv

Zeejay :)

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Nadia

@naddiya26

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

i do have time ,you just don't forget to pm me as i miss without pm..loved it ..there will be a jealousy track ...very interesting... loved it

add me in pm

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654772

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it!!! Seriously all the os's and ss's and ff's are keeping memfrom writing my own!!!

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Flame.

@Flame.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Ohh man this was soo amazinggg!

The story is different and i love it.

Ahh that picture so beautiful. Please add me i your PM list. Continue soon. Its superb.

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey hun!

This was a very interesting OS. Very different!

I loved the feeling in it. There was no exchange of dialogue between Arnav and Khushi, yet the scene was so powerful!!

A brilliant piece of writing dear.

Thanks for the PM!!

😊

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

That was so cute! I hope you do more with this story. We can get to see jelousde Arnav, which is something I so BADLY want to see on the show! Jelousy will show him what he actually feels for Kushi. He will get all possesive and sexy! Cant wait for it...Please do update.