Aaslok: beyond the limit part 8 21/5/2014 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
its awesome cant w8 to read it
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#42
Nice prologue. Can't wait to read it:)
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#43
Awesome epilogue
U r going to write a new story
Omg. .
Thanks a lot
I love your stories...
Um really excited
Waiting for the story eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meilliures

Awesome epilogue

U r going to write a new story
Omg. .
Thanks a lot
I love your stories...
Um really excited
Waiting for the story eagerly

yes
thanks
and welcome a lot
and thanks that you are excited for my stories
love u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awesome dear...
Waiting for next part...
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Part 1

"You are changed... you are not my Swati whom I knew..." He said her and she sighed in helplessness.

"Why do you think that...? I am your Swati..." She replied in low tone although she also knew that she was not the same person but she had to look composed and calm.

"I don't know why but I feel strange whenever you come near me..." he said and her hand had shivered in her lap. She was giving him medicine and he was noticing her every action very precisely. He was not fool. He knew that something had changed after the accident. He could feel this whenever he looked in her hazel eyes. He could feel the emptiness of those. He loved her dearly and he could know from her touch that when she wanted what. But from past few days he felt her touch very strange. He could feel the coldness in her heart. She was not same Swati anymore.

"Ok I believe you... may be I am wrong ..." he said with soft smile. "But I want to know why you look so sad and distress in these days..." he asked after pause

"I am sad and distress because of you only..." her tongue slipped while he looked her with surprised eyes

"Because of me..." he questioned her

"Actually I cannot see you in this state so long so I am worried..." she tried to divert his attention from her words.

"Ohhh... Dear don't worry I will be alright very soon..." he took her hand in his big palm and smiled while she saw him helplessly.

"Ok tell me one thing... I am just injured now so you are so tensed but what happened if I dies in that accident..." he smirked while she suddenly looked him

"Then Swati also dies..." she replied in painful tone when he put his finger on her lips

"Never say again this... if anything happen with you... then I swear I will die in next moment..." he cupped her face in both of hand and kissed her forehead. She could not control anymore on her tears which were desperate to flow from her eyes so she ran outside.

***********...************

"Oh god how he is mad in love but what happen when he will know about the reality..." she thought and caressed her face. She still felt his touch on her face. She was restless about the future. Suddenly her phone ring broke silence around her. She picked the call

"Hello... yes how are you..." she asked to the person from another side

"I am fine... how are you... dear" the person asked.

"I am ok so tell me whats the matter... why did you call me..." she asked with sighed

"I am fed up with the situation... now I want to know clearly when will be all this stop..." the person asked hurriedly and enraged tone

"Look I cannot tell you anything right now and for your satisfaction I am also not very happy with all this happening but I am obligated to my family and parents. I cannot go against them and also I don't want to hurt him. He is very genuine person and I cannot betray him suddenly... I will tell him on right time... and if you cannot wait then you are free from my side... do whatever you want..." she said in thoughtful tone and very composed manner.

"What... how can you say all this to me and just because of him... who the hell he is..." the person became angry and shouted on her over the phone

"He is family..." she said ,and wiped her tears and fell on the chair like chopped tree.

"oh you are changed..." the person said surprisingly when she shouted

"yes I am changed what do you say upon this..." she cut the call

Her life was playing the games with her. She was very happy and contended in her past but now everything was changed. She had to live in bubble. She wanted to shout and tell the truth to the world but she could not do like this. She cried in alone. It became her routine. She looked strong in front of him but in alone she opened her heart and poured out all her sadness and pains through her tears.

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"swati where are you?" he called her when she came quickly inside

"What happened... do you need anything..." she asked when he nodded his head

"Where is your family... this is strange... they did not come to meet me yet..." he asked when she looked down

"Mummy papa came when you were sleeping so they didn't disturb you..." she replied in same low tone.

"And Aastha ..." he asked and suddenly she looked in his eyes anxiously...

"She went to America after marriage so she cannot come to meet you but she called me to ask about you..." she replied quickly as a kid repeat the rhetorical answer.

"Oh she married really... but when ... I mean it is very good news ..." he asked in happy and surprised tone

"Yes she married when you were in coma. She didn't want to marry without you but his fianc had to return America so mummy papa decided and persuaded her." she told him but she didn't know herself what she said. This was all lie which she told him.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
ressy
Unressy!!
Hello Shello!!
From the first chapter only uh have started to add the Twists!!😆
It was really confusing!!
Haww!! Shlok loves Swati?😲
but I am getting a feeling that, the lady is not Swati but Aastha!!🤔
nd maybe Swati left shlok nd married with someone else!!
But why is Aastha lying?😕
ugrhh!! my mind is now overloaded with a lot of Questions!!🥱
hoping to get it all clear after reading few other chapters!!
nywayz incredible update!! continue soon!!😳

Edited by pwenCezz_symrun - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Yay!! m first nd that too without PM!!
i m really a very good stalker!!😎

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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
this is confusing
shlok was in coma
nd where is astha nd y is she lying to him
do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start Roshani!👏 The hazel eyes, hmmm Astha am I right?! Whats happened to Swati that Astha has to oppose as her?!😃 Has Astha had plastic surgery?!😆 Lol questions questions everywhere??!! Continue soon, to get us out of this confusion🤗
Edited by xayeshax - 11 years ago

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