ashlok ss ..my crush❤️ part 9 pg 19 updated :) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12

hey guys sorry for delay 12 class hain na...so was busy in studies...

part 5:
recap:aastha went runningly...shlok stood there smiling...
flashback...
during luchbreak on the first day...
swati:mr shlok agn agihotri...kaafi charm hai aapme...
shlok:ha woh toh hain main kisi bhi ladki ko aapna deewana bana sakta hoon...
karan (swati frnd, jealous of shlok):achaa aisa baat hai toh i challenge aastha kirloskar ko aapnaa deewana banaake dikhaye...
shlok:i cant play with ther feelings...
swathi:cummon shlok...its just a challenge ...agar himmat hai...
shlok:humaari family mein har kisi ke paas himmat hoti hain...
karan:so challenge accepted...
shlok a bit hesistant ...but thinking of his Family ...
shlok:accepted...
swati:theek hain iss year ke end tak aastha ko apna deewana bana kar dikhau
shlok:done...
back to present...
shlok still standing there lost in thoghts of whether he is doing right or wrong with aastha...
when he heard his friends calling...
shlok humm jeet gayee...shlok...
shlok runs in hapiness and hugs them...
shlok:guys tum logo ne kamaal kar diya...party toh banti hain...
everone started shouting yaayy...and lifted shlok and shouted...yaay st.zaviers ki jai...
shlok got down ...grabbed a mike and announced...
shlok:kal raat 8 baje mere yaanah party hain toh all the people who cheered for me are also invited...everyone claapped in hapiness...
gauri:yayy agnihotri mansion ki party...mazaa aa jayegaa...
aastha started getting up and going when her eyes met shlok eyes...
he stared at her but she looked down...but again their eyes met...
he winked at her...making her heart skip a bit...this football uniform made him look more hot...
she ran away to overcome his gaze...

ok guys so hope u all liked it...😊tried my best..but u guys are free to give suggessionss...


That was a cute wala update😳😳😳😳...
So karan challenged shlok😈...
But we know that shlokie's fake love plan will backfire on him and he will fall for our doll astha...
waiting for the next party update with some lovely ashlok moments☺️...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: meerab...


That was a cute wala update😳...
So karan challenged shlok😈...
But we know that shlokie's fake love plan will backfire on him and he will fall for our doll astha...
waiting for the next party update with some lovely ashlok moments☺️...

aap kahaa theee dear...?? yaaa toommm one big update...ty for comments⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12

aap kahaa theee dear...?? yaaa toommm one big update...ty for comments⭐️



dear i was preparing for my coming tests...as now holidays ending...so may be u will get my comments with a little delay...becoz college starting again...but sooner or later i will always comment😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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read it in one go.. lovely❤️
please do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab...



dear i was preparing for my coming tests...as now holidays ending...so may be u will get my comments with a little delay...becoz college starting again...but sooner or later i will always comment😛

ohhh ok dear study well...and Ty for ur support ...but I can't write as good as u ...thnks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ty for continuous suppot..and ur comments😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranud

read it in one go.. lovely❤️

please do pm me

awww Ty sweets...l😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12

ohhh ok dear study well...and Ty for ur support ...but I can't write as good as u ...thnks dear

welcome dear...and u r awesome writer sweety...i love ur every single update...and ur writings are very very cute and sweet...and i m not kidding😛🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ty dearrr😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok guys here u go...ty all soo much for this wonderful support...and love u all my readers...❤️
part 6
aastha and gauri were in the bus (they both were neighbours)and their mothers were also good friends...
aastha:hayee gauri ab kya hoga...aayi to kabhi nahii maanegi...
gauri:itni betaabii toh maine tujhme mere ghar aane ke liye bhi nahi dekhi...
aastha:nahi woh shlok ne personally invite kiyaa toh...
gauri:acha ms boring ne yeh baat chupayi mujh se...
aastha:nahi woh...
gauri:acha chal jaldi bata...
aashta:(flashback):during the break time...(last 10 minutes of school)in the locker room...
shlok and aastha had lockers one above the other...
aasthas loceker was above shloks...aastha was about to put her computer book which was the heaviest textbook...she could not put it...as she could not reach it...when a hand touched her hand softly and the book was kept in the locker...she couldnt turn back as shlok held her hand...
aastha:meraa hath chodiyee shlok...
shlok:theek hai par ek shart pein...
aastha:kya...?
shlok:aapko kal meri party mein aana hoga..
aastha:i will try...but...
shlok:par var kuch nahi...
they heard footsteps...
aastha:chodiye shlok...
shlok:nahi...
aastha:koi aa raha hai...
shlok:pehle aap...
aastha:okk ok i wiill cum...
shlok then left her hand...and she stopped shivering...
back to bus...
gauri:achaa toh yeh baat hai...tu fikr mat kar...main kalindi aunty ko manaa lungi...
aastha:sach tyyy...
gauri:bas tu 7:30 tak ready rehnaa ok...
aastha:Ok...
in kirloskar house...
aastha was getting ready...she wore a green anarkali suit...and with the jwellery and make up...she looked no less than a angel...
she was staring at the mirror thonking about shlok... when she heard the doorbell...
she ran to see gauri...
gauri:chal aastha...
kalindi:agar tu nahi hoti toh main aastha ko kabhi nahi bhejti...
gauri:aap fikr math kijiye aaunty...main hoon naa...
kalindi:wohi toh problem hai...
both girls started laughing...
ahnihotri mansion...
aasthaa and gauri entered...and were shocked to see such a big house decorated beautifully..
..aastha was hesistant to go inside...
gauri pushed aastha inside from the door...she slipped...but before she could fall...she closed her eyes...and opened her eyes to find herself in shloks arms...
shlok stared at her unbelieivingly...he couldnt beleive she looked soo pretty...as he had seen her only in school uniform...
their eyes met and they were lost in each others eyes...until aastha realized that...everyone was watching them...she left shloks hand and they got back to normal position...
anjali came and welcomed aastha and gauri...
they both were seated...and aastha heart stll beated very fastt...
ok guys to be continued hope its long enough...😊


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